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Sep 3, 2012 18:54:15   #
FRENCHY Loc: Stone Mountain , Ga
 
I am trying to get used to differents lenses , I am very interested in Close up photos ( this one is a try ) can I get your advice so I can do maybe better ?

Thank you

Guy

Please I welcome your comments and critics



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Sep 3, 2012 18:57:41   #
seeSAW Loc: Western Mass
 
Good focus. I would suggest not framing the subject in the center of the image.

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Sep 3, 2012 18:58:10   #
jerryc41 Loc: Catskill Mts of NY
 
FRENCHY wrote:
I am trying to get used to differents lenses , I am very interested in Close up photos ( this one is a try ) can I get your advice so I can do maybe better ?

Thank you

Guy

Please I welcome your comments and critics

Good exposure and focus. It looks like he's daydreaming.

As a non-expert critic, I would say the duck is too much in the center and too low. You could have pulled back a bit and shown more of the duck. Increased contrast would help, too.

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Sep 3, 2012 19:33:23   #
FRENCHY Loc: Stone Mountain , Ga
 
Thank you Jerryc and Seesaw , I will do that

Guy

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Sep 3, 2012 19:56:35   #
tk Loc: Iowa
 
I agree with both. You focus is very good and the subject is great. But the position of the bird is not welcoming to view the photo for any length of time. More contrast would add to the pull of our eyes.

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Sep 3, 2012 21:38:39   #
MtnMan Loc: ID
 
jerryc41 wrote:
FRENCHY wrote:
I am trying to get used to differents lenses , I am very interested in Close up photos ( this one is a try ) can I get your advice so I can do maybe better ?

Thank you

Guy

Please I welcome your comments and critics

Good exposure and focus. It looks like he's daydreaming.

As a non-expert critic, I would say the duck is too much in the center and too low. You could have pulled back a bit and shown more of the duck. Increased contrast would help, too.
quote=FRENCHY I am trying to get used to differen... (show quote)


Looks like a Canada Goose but can't quite figure out the white stuff on his beak?

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Sep 4, 2012 08:35:31   #
Georgia Peddler Loc: Brunswick, GA
 
Good shot - I agree, composition is a bit off but a good in-focus shot. Maybe a vertical shot to get more of the bird and a little judicious cropping.
But anyway, good shot - keep it up and you will be amazed at how you come quickly to view things in your viewfinder differently. Don't try to worry about it all at one time - just tinker-it's fun/

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Sep 4, 2012 10:16:15   #
FRENCHY Loc: Stone Mountain , Ga
 
TK-Mtn Man -Georgia Peddler
Thank you for you answer . I have to keep at it , is fun to start a hobby
The white stuff on his/her beak is a feather I believe he/she was groming when I was trying to adjust my foot and not fall in the lake . :-D

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