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Critique Please
Sep 2, 2012 07:34:17 #
Sep 2, 2012 08:02:46 #
Sep 2, 2012 09:01:50 #
I think it's a great first attempt.
Too me, it looks like the light source is a bit too bright.
Too me, it looks like the light source is a bit too bright.
Sep 3, 2012 05:22:39 #
erniehatt
Loc: Queensland Australia
Lovely pose and very sharp, well done , great effort. Main light could have been backed off. Ernie
Sep 3, 2012 05:35:51 #
Sep 3, 2012 07:05:13 #
Yes, it is nice but the light on the forehead is a little to bright
Sep 3, 2012 12:47:19 #
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Sep 3, 2012 13:45:54 #
Robeng
Loc: California
Hi Jackaroo,
For a first attempt, good job! I think the image overall is a little too bright. I Would have cleaned up the lines underneath her eyes and soften her skin a little. Just my opinion. If you want you can see some of my images at www.robeng.smugmug.com. Go to people and type in password "Girls"
For a first attempt, good job! I think the image overall is a little too bright. I Would have cleaned up the lines underneath her eyes and soften her skin a little. Just my opinion. If you want you can see some of my images at www.robeng.smugmug.com. Go to people and type in password "Girls"
Sep 3, 2012 14:21:17 #
Jackaroo wrote:
First attempt in home studio all comments and advise welcomed
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Sep 4, 2012 00:02:13 #
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