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Keyboard Abstraction
Sep 20, 2018 14:13:52   #
DaveC1 Loc: South East US
 
Or maybe Keyboard Distraction.

For best viewing as always download. Sony a7, Jupiter9 lens f22, 1/50 second shutter speed. Edge filter and B&W conversion in PP.


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Sep 20, 2018 14:35:39   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
The strengths of the composition (and pp) for me are the keys: shiny mesmerizing patterns, shapes and play of dark vs. light.

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Sep 20, 2018 14:45:59   #
DaveC1 Loc: South East US
 
Thank you Linda; this was shot with the far end of the keyboard facing a window with daylight pouring in and some reflections on the white keys. And yes the keys as the focus of the image is where I was going from square one.

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Sep 20, 2018 22:15:14   #
ebrunner Loc: New Jersey Shore
 
DaveC1 wrote:
Or maybe Keyboard Distraction.

For best viewing as always download. Sony a7, Jupiter9 lens f22, 1/50 second shutter speed. Edge filter and B&W conversion in PP.


It is almost an abstract. The funky pp really works in this image. If I were to pick a nit or two, I might suggest that the pattern on the wall is the only distraction in the composition. I might have darkened it or made it black. That's completely subjective, though. This photo has high impact value and it is very engaging. I like it very much.
Erich

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Sep 21, 2018 08:30:14   #
DaveC1 Loc: South East US
 
ebrunner wrote:
It is almost an abstract. The funky pp really works in this image. If I were to pick a nit or two, I might suggest that the pattern on the wall is the only distraction in the composition. I might have darkened it or made it black. That's completely subjective, though. This photo has high impact value and it is very engaging. I like it very much.
Erich


Thanks Erich. I thought about removing the stuff on the right but in the end decided not to. This was stuff that was on the image from somewhere (its not really there in real life) but not visible before the edge filter was applied and then brought to the surface so to speak.

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Sep 21, 2018 08:57:23   #
NJFrank Loc: New Jersey
 
I like the look. The gritty look you performed in PP is a plus as far as I am concerned.

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Sep 21, 2018 09:34:14   #
artBob Loc: Near Chicago
 
The look is very effective. I wonder if playing with colors other than the blue-green might bring out how you feel about music.

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Sep 21, 2018 09:49:55   #
DaveC1 Loc: South East US
 
Thank you Frank and Bob for stopping by and commenting. I didn't want to get too wild with the distortions Bob and the blue seemed to fit the mood best. There was another possibility with a red/yellow axis but I judged it as being a bit too much.

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Sep 21, 2018 10:49:29   #
rmalarz Loc: Tempe, Arizona
 
Very nice. I have a Jupiter 8 and a 12. Very good glass.
--Bob
DaveC1 wrote:
Or maybe Keyboard Distraction.

For best viewing as always download. Sony a7, Jupiter9 lens f22, 1/50 second shutter speed. Edge filter and B&W conversion in PP.

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Sep 21, 2018 10:57:38   #
DaveC1 Loc: South East US
 
rmalarz wrote:
Very nice. I have a Jupiter 8 and a 12. Very good glass.
--Bob

Thanks so much Bob.

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Sep 21, 2018 11:47:53   #
wayne barnett Loc: Grants Pass, Oregon
 
Good shot. Does not need any change in my opinion. Sort of conveys the concept of rhythm and blues.

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Sep 21, 2018 16:37:47   #
ebrunner Loc: New Jersey Shore
 
DaveC1 wrote:
Thanks Erich. I thought about removing the stuff on the right but in the end decided not to. This was stuff that was on the image from somewhere (its not really there in real life) but not visible before the edge filter was applied and then brought to the surface so to speak.


Those filters do add funky artifacts; but, if you are looking for funky, that is not a bad thing. Well done.
Erich

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Sep 21, 2018 17:20:37   #
DaveC1 Loc: South East US
 
Thanks Erich, Wayne

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Sep 26, 2018 21:02:51   #
pfrancke Loc: cold Maine
 
good fun here - makes me wish I had an old ancient typewriter..

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