Beautiful scene from my trip in May to Utah
Aug 4, 2018 10:55:23 #
One of the many beautiful scenes I was privalaged to photograph on a recent trip to Utah
Aug 4, 2018 10:59:30 #
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Aug 4, 2018 11:12:20 #
I like your photograph. It could improve by two means: More exposure and then cropping from the bottom edge up.
This cropping brings the photograph into visual balance by the layering effect in which the sky, the trees, and water take up, approximately, the same area within the frame.
Too much river surface in the frame risks including dead space. Cropping leaves in the water element as essential to the visual experience of this scene as complete, involving sky, trees, and water.
Please see my slight tweaking of your photograph to illustrate my critique.
Good luck.
This cropping brings the photograph into visual balance by the layering effect in which the sky, the trees, and water take up, approximately, the same area within the frame.
Too much river surface in the frame risks including dead space. Cropping leaves in the water element as essential to the visual experience of this scene as complete, involving sky, trees, and water.
Please see my slight tweaking of your photograph to illustrate my critique.
Good luck.
grandpaw wrote:
One of the many beautiful scenes I was privalaged to photograph on a recent trip to Utah
River Scene in Utah, as edited
Aug 4, 2018 11:12:36 #
Aug 4, 2018 11:19:10 #
You are correct, it is beautiful. Great river lead-in line, color, and general composition. It's nice to have such a great remembrance of nature's beauty.
Aug 4, 2018 11:24:18 #
Aug 4, 2018 11:27:08 #
anotherview wrote:
I like your photograph. It could improve by two m... (show quote)
Appreciate your comments but I think I still prefer the original. Thanks Grandpaw
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Aug 5, 2018 06:12:31 #
grandpaw wrote:
One of the many beautiful scenes I was privalaged to photograph on a recent trip to Utah
I want to fish it.
Jim
Aug 5, 2018 06:36:27 #
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Aug 5, 2018 07:47:31 #
grandpaw wrote:
One of the many beautiful scenes I was privalaged to photograph on a recent trip to Utah
Just needs a kayak.
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