Bay Bridge Walkway
Apr 17, 2018 12:42:27 #
Bazbo
Loc: Lisboa, Portugal
This is from the pedestrian walkway on the Oakland Bay Bridge.
Nikon D850
Nikkor 24-70 mm
f/16
1/320
Comments and critique welcome
Nikon D850
Nikkor 24-70 mm
f/16
1/320
Comments and critique welcome
Apr 18, 2018 09:57:26 #
Apr 18, 2018 10:11:34 #
Very nice shot. One quibble. My eye is drawn to the left side of the shot by the closest four verticals in the fence. You might consider cropping them out so your eye is more naturally drawn towards infinity where the real meat of your shot is. I think the reason my eye is drawn to the left is both the size of the vertical pipes and the very visible gaps between them. But if your intent is to grab my attention there first and then lead me down the walkway, the shot is perfect.
Apr 18, 2018 13:43:07 #
jfdnp
Loc: Coastal Connecticut
Bazbo wrote:
This is from the pedestrian walkway on the Oakland Bay Bridge.
Nikon D850
Nikkor 24-70 mm
f/16
1/320
Comments and critique welcome
Nikon D850
Nikkor 24-70 mm
f/16
1/320
Comments and critique welcome
Great shot, especially in B&W. Didn't know it had a walkway..will need to check it out!
Apr 18, 2018 13:52:14 #
Bazbo
Loc: Lisboa, Portugal
Burtzy wrote:
Very nice shot. One quibble. My eye is drawn to the left side of the shot by the closest four verticals in the fence. You might consider cropping them out so your eye is more naturally drawn towards infinity where the real meat of your shot is. I think the reason my eye is drawn to the left is both the size of the vertical pipes and the very visible gaps between them. But if your intent is to grab my attention there first and then lead me down the walkway, the shot is perfect.
Thank you for the thoughtful critique
Apr 21, 2018 20:26:03 #
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