Challenge Series: Stockholm, Sweden - Your Vision to Create Impact.
Shakey
Loc: Traveling again to Norway and other places.
SoHillGuy wrote:
Nonconformist.
Yep, your image really is nonconformist, SoHillGuy. You went your own way, and I said the interpretation was to be yours. Perhaps you have a dislike of focal points for this image. Hence, no crop. The image does have a certain appeal in its complexity: unusual light sky but very dark reflections on the ice.
Would it appeal to a photo editor? Maybe - maybe not. You get four thumbs for your thinking:
Revet
Loc: Fairview Park, Ohio
Shakey wrote:
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LOL, I agree. I probably used every filter Luminar offers to play around with this photo. I remember when I first got Lightroom and Photoshop, I overbaked all my images but now use more subtle changes. The treatment of this photo is a good example that you need to get away from the image and come back to it later!!!
Thanks for the exercise!!
Shakey
Loc: Traveling again to Norway and other places.
davefales wrote:
back at ya
Dave, you like to comment. However, if you read the preamble at the top of page 1, you'll see a request for members not to comment until they have posted their interpretation of the challenge. The problem is we get members posting comments telling us how to do it but they don't post an image in response to the challenge. This means they can talk the talk but not walk the walk. If you want to comment in future, please meet the challenge and post your interpretation. We would love to welcome you as a participating Challenge member.
Here is my effort for this challenge, which is a challenge. lol Finding it difficult to get a workflow going with so many filters to use and when to use them. So this is a learning experience.
Shakey
Loc: Traveling again to Norway and other places.
Shakey wrote:
Here's Stockholm, Sweden at sunset. As you can see it very cold, the river is frozen. The photograph is interesting but lacks impact. Your challenge is to give the image impact.
To help members who struggle with visualizing the changes you need here are a few tips.
1. The sky area and the frozen river area are more or less the same size. This is a no-no, crop one or the other to draw the viewers eye to the focal point.
2. The tallest building in the old city is just off center. Another no-no if it is the point of interest. Crop one side or the other of the image to place it in a more eye catching position. Think of Rule of Thirds; The Golden Mean; Rule of Fifths; etc,. Rules are not set in concrete, place it where you thing it looks best.
3. The sky lacks detail. You may improve the sky or replace it. Your choice. The sun is setting behind the tallest buildings.
4. The ice on the river has some detail but it cold be improved. Should the ice reflect the color of the sky? Check on line to see how ice looks in the best images. Search Shutterstock.com or Google images.
5. Is the city too small? Do you need to zoom in on it?
6. Do not have two areas competing for attention. One area or object should be dominant. Everything else serves to aid impact.
Have at it any way you want. We need an image with IMPACT or the WOW factor.
PLEASE do not comment until you have posted your interpretation of the image below.
No RAW file. The .png file will be fine.
Here's Stockholm, Sweden at sunset. As you can see... (
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Hi Shakey, a little late to the party, again. But, here's my edit.
Mike
Shakey
Loc: Traveling again to Norway and other places.
SalvageDiver wrote:
Hi Shakey, a little late to the party, again. But, here's my edit.
Mike
Better late than never, SalvageDiver. Yep, you gave this some thought with the pink clouds and all, but not enough. The snow is white, great. However, the buildings are subdued, almost washed out. You should be aiming for bold bright colors. There is way too much ice, which does nothing to enhance the image. You need to crop most of the bottom of the image. Maybe you rushed it because you were late to meet the challenge. You can do way better than this.
You get three thumbs this time.
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