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Sep 18, 2017 16:58:06   #
Buckeye4ever Loc: Maryland
 
Just want feedback...I am VERY new at taking sports' Shots. Would like to know where to start with this 1st edit in Lr



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Sep 18, 2017 17:08:09   #
PhotoKurtz Loc: Carterville, IL
 
Welcome aboard! Try this: Erase the post and past some other kid's face on to the flying kid. Then crop it down to the flying kids and some feet. Nice timing!

If you want me to give it a try it would be fun.

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Sep 18, 2017 17:13:07   #
cmc65
 
What equipment are you shooting with?

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Sep 18, 2017 19:10:23   #
Rongnongno Loc: FL
 
Before going into post processing and all that crap to learn, try mastering your camera. This is way over exposed.

Fix that and you are half way there... Sort of.

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Sep 18, 2017 19:18:39   #
cmc65
 
Rongnongno wrote:
Before going into post processing and all that crap to learn, try mastering your camera. This is way over exposed.

Fix that and you are half way there... Sort of.


Hence why I asked what he was using for equipment. Best to start at the beginning and work up. ๐Ÿ˜

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Sep 18, 2017 22:09:19   #
via the lens Loc: Northern California, near Yosemite NP
 
Buckeye4ever wrote:
Just want feedback...I am VERY new at taking sports' Shots. Would like to know where to start with this 1st edit in Lr


From a composition perspective I believe that the best part of the shot is the young man in red throwing himself at the ball, but his entire face is cut off; a close up of this young man in the air would have created a wonderful action shot. But perhaps the boy in blue going after the ball to kick it was in your family somehow as he seems to be the subject in the image. Learning the guidelines (can't say "rules" or someone will get all itchy about it) will help you in photographing moving subjects and tracking them as they move about. Decide which kid, in this scenario, is important and then follow him or her attempting to put them into the composition in a way that focuses on them as the subject. Also, try not to get parts of other people in the photo if at all possible or take the shot in such a way that you know you can crop them out or that the body part included will look ok to a viewer (the young man you left in looks very awkward in the image). You did get most of the photo sharp and that's a great start. You also focused on the action and that is a good start, too. You exposure in this image is not great, as the grass was very obviously very bright and it is obvious in the image. Try using exposure compensation to the negative side to get better exposure. When you arrive take test shots to see what exposure setting will be best. Monitor the exposure setting using the camera histogram, take test shots as needed if the light changes and reset the exposure. You might be able, in this shot, to simply decrease overall exposure in post if you have not already tried that. Shooting moving objects takes time to learn, just keep on taking shots and experimenting to see what works for you. Remember to decide on your subject and stay with the subject for awhile to determine movement patterns so that you can be ready for what will happen in the next moments of the game.

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Sep 19, 2017 07:35:56   #
Buckeye4ever Loc: Maryland
 
Thank you and yes, go for it! I don't know how to erase yet. Will read up on it and also look to see if I have a picture of that keeper so you can get his real face. Would like to keep the shooter because he's my grandson.

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Sep 19, 2017 07:37:28   #
Buckeye4ever Loc: Maryland
 
A Canon 6D with EF 70-200mm

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Sep 19, 2017 09:06:15   #
Mary Kate Loc: NYC
 
Buckeye4ever wrote:
Just want feedback...I am VERY new at taking sports' Shots. Would like to know where to start with this 1st edit in Lr


The goal pole is distracting.

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Sep 19, 2017 10:44:26   #
PhotoKurtz Loc: Carterville, IL
 
Pls check for PM.

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Sep 19, 2017 10:50:47   #
Dannj
 
Action sports shots are tough. As others have said the best part of this shot is the airborne keeper diving for the ball. Too bad you couldn't anticipate this๐Ÿ˜Š
When I've done sports, I've tried to avoid following the action and set myself up where something is likely to happen. Eventually, it works.
As for this particular shot I'd tone down the exposure and crop out the kid on the left...unless he's your's of course!

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Sep 26, 2017 15:09:25   #
Buckeye4ever Loc: Maryland
 
Hi! Got back home and this is the original I am sending you plus another pic of that goalie. If you have the time to experiment please do, but if not no worries.


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