Oh the best side up!
The only criticism I have is that I would like to see more detail in the leather. it seems a little underexposed. Working with such great contrasts is difficult.
olc
The issue for me is that the image you captured on the left is so beautiful; the symmetry of the model in white, the abundance of geometric shapes and angles, etc., while the lack of any definition or point of interest on the model in black makes that side of the image extremely crop worthy, it adds nothing, the trunk of a tree would have been equally as good. The left side does make it an image I love. Thanks for posting it.
JohnFrim
Loc: Somewhere in the Great White North.
I agree that the black leather needs a bit more definition, which might be possible with careful PP. That would make this a really great shot. My other comment is that because your model in the white has no skin flaws or texture it made me wonder if these were dressed up manikins; I hope not.
BboH
Loc: s of 2/21, Ellicott City, MD
Purely erotic! Agree that the model on the left should be illuminated better.
Quite a statement made there.
1st off.... Thanks for posting .... As time moves on, we are having more and more people contributing to this Section and with that, we gain more insight in this style of work!
My C&C would be similar to others.... I think the right side of the image has to have more light. I think if it's possible, I would expand the crop wider as well to allow more 'recognition' (for lack of a better word) of both shapes. I think it's an interesting image but, IMHO a second pass into the editing stream could improve this a great deal. Now, please read my first sentence of this Reply again!....i.e. Thanks for posting!
John
I would have bounced more light onto the black side.
Thanks muchly for your instructive comments. I would not want to crop out the right because the dark vs. light contrast, feminine vs. strict, is what I was going for. But I do think I could bring out more from the leather. And for you skeptics, no, these girls are most definitely NOT (wo)manikins: Kamryn on the left and Sarah (pro-dominatrix) on the right. But I'll pass on your compliments. :-) Thanks again.
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