A few more birds from the Borrego Springs Area, S. Cal
Mar 28, 2017 18:21:35 #
Mar 28, 2017 19:09:34 #
Mar 28, 2017 19:53:05 #
All very good, but that Western Kingbird is a wall-hanger. What great lines it has.
Mar 28, 2017 22:03:53 #
Mar 28, 2017 22:13:35 #
GregWCIL wrote:
All very good, but that Western Kingbird is a wall-hanger. What great lines it has.
Ya, that one is kinda special to me as well.
Mar 29, 2017 08:34:42 #
Nalu wrote:
Just thought I would share a few more from the Bor... (show quote)
Excellent set, Frank, and almost unbelievable when double clicked! Thanks!
Apr 8, 2017 11:39:55 #
A very nice selection of birds Nalu. 
You asked for constructive critiques.
If these were my shots I would do the following.
No.3. Remove the twig that is in front of the bird, it could be removed at the fork in the branch. It detracts from the shot.
No.5. Remove the flower that is in front of the bird. It competes for attention.
No.7. Very nice (My favourite), including background. But crop some off the top until the bird's eye crosses the top one third line. This should give the bird a stronger presence in the shot.
No.8. Crop off the flower on the left. It competes for attention.
You asked for constructive critiques.
If these were my shots I would do the following.
No.3. Remove the twig that is in front of the bird, it could be removed at the fork in the branch. It detracts from the shot.
No.5. Remove the flower that is in front of the bird. It competes for attention.
No.7. Very nice (My favourite), including background. But crop some off the top until the bird's eye crosses the top one third line. This should give the bird a stronger presence in the shot.
No.8. Crop off the flower on the left. It competes for attention.
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