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Sweet Innocence
Nov 4, 2016 17:17:36 #
Nov 4, 2016 19:58:09 #
Interesting Image. Executed in fine fashion. Now, please explain the triange of someone watching her?
TheStarvingArtist wrote:
Sweet Innocence
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Nov 4, 2016 20:25:18 #
I don't care for the cutoff foot considering all of the headroom you had. also the high key of the subject doesn't match the low key background. as far as the demon/devil looking at her through the rip it just doesn't seem to be executed that well. the impression I get is you have 3 separate elements that you tried to paste together to make one photo, and they just don't quite fit together for me.
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Nov 4, 2016 22:47:54 #
PixelStan77 wrote:
Interesting Image. Executed in fine fashion. Now, please explain the triange of someone watching her?
The girl is how others view her, the one watching her is how she views herself.
Nov 5, 2016 06:54:49 #
lukan
Loc: Chicago, IL
TheStarvingArtist wrote:
The girl is how others view her, the one watching her is how she views herself.
Wow. Very interesting and thoughtful, to say the least! Well conceived and executed.
Nov 5, 2016 07:55:54 #
tsilva wrote:
I don't care for the cutoff foot considering all of the headroom you had. also the high key of the subject doesn't match the low key background. as far as the demon/devil looking at her through the rip it just doesn't seem to be executed that well. the impression I get is you have 3 separate elements that you tried to paste together to make one photo, and they just don't quite fit together for me.
I agree 100% in all aspects.
Nov 5, 2016 08:19:22 #
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Nov 5, 2016 08:30:14 #
Its thought provoking in its own way but the execution could be a lot better. The points that need attention have been mentioned and it does look like exactly what it is which is three elements pasted together without any cohesion. And if its about sweet innocence it may have helped if the model actually looked even a trifle innocent. Nice idea but needs more thought and care put into it.
Nov 5, 2016 08:47:31 #
RichieC
Loc: Adirondacks
Concept... ok. Execution of your explanation not so. " How's she see herself" is not conveyed by using someone else's eyes. You don't picture yourself by envisioning another persons eyeballs. Saying they are her eyes looking at herself is really a reach. A reflection perhaps- but she'd have to be looking into the reflection. To see herself.
Re-title it- your explanation doesn't match the title nor do either explain the image.
Did you take the images? Or just arrange them?
Re-title it- your explanation doesn't match the title nor do either explain the image.
Did you take the images? Or just arrange them?
Nov 5, 2016 08:59:24 #
TheStarvingArtist wrote:
The girl is how others view her, the one watching her is how she views herself.
Some take themselves too seriously.
Nov 5, 2016 09:52:34 #
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Nov 5, 2016 10:55:00 #
I photographed her on a gray cloth that she is sitting on. The reason the foot is cut off is because I didn't notice part of the cloth was covering her foot at the time.
Nov 5, 2016 11:16:35 #
TheStarvingArtist wrote:
I photographed her on a gray cloth that she is sitting on. The reason the foot is cut off is because I didn't notice part of the cloth was covering her foot at the time.
Your shooting digital right? don't you check your LCD screen after you shoot?
Why post and image that has a problem? Actually a beginners mistake.
Nov 5, 2016 12:05:53 #
So man negative comments so I decided to look through those portfolios. Then I decided I just needed to consider the sources.
Nov 5, 2016 16:50:46 #
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