David Morrison wrote:
Greg, I think you've made quite a good job of this portrait, and it looks quite professional.You've got important elements working --ie... the catch lights are present which look convincing, good modelling ( shadow contrast etc ) and the subject has an engages the viewer. For a female , you would possibly want a softer, less gritty and less contrast, but here, for your son, the exposure is appropriate and works well .Great work!--D.
Thanks for looking, I posted this shot to get some feed back because I was hoping I was on the right track with the lighting set up . I did add a lot of grit to try toughen up the look.
My step daughter came over after I posted the shot of my Son and sat for a variation of this lighting set up, so I will post that shot here. She will probably kill me for posting it since she came over after work with her hair a mess and make up messed up.