Want your opinion
Mar 3, 2016 16:10:29 #
Mar 3, 2016 16:12:46 #
alliebess
Loc: suburban Philadelphia
dandi wrote:
Here is my youngest grandson.
Your opinion and comments are welcome.
Your opinion and comments are welcome.
Cute kid. Nice photo and lighting, but I would like more room at the top so that his head has more space.
Mar 3, 2016 16:17:20 #
Mar 3, 2016 16:26:03 #
Mar 3, 2016 16:34:59 #
Overhead light is too strong, projecting shadows. you escaped racoon eyes only because the child is looking up.
Other than that you might want to do some PP to attenuate the blue bags under his eyes.
Overall, good, in focus and the kid is not bored so... Ok.
Other than that you might want to do some PP to attenuate the blue bags under his eyes.
Overall, good, in focus and the kid is not bored so... Ok.
Mar 3, 2016 16:41:37 #
Mar 3, 2016 16:47:53 #
dandi
Loc: near Seattle, WA
Rongnongno wrote:
Overhead light is too strong, projecting shadows. you escaped racoon eyes only because the child is looking up.
Other than that you might want to do some PP to attenuate the blue bags under his eyes.
Overall, good, in focus and the kid is not bored so... Ok.
Other than that you might want to do some PP to attenuate the blue bags under his eyes.
Overall, good, in focus and the kid is not bored so... Ok.
Oh, this kid is never bored. He was jumping on the bed and gave me a second to catch him in the air. I am surprised he is in focus.
Mar 3, 2016 18:44:02 #
Nice shot. A narrower crop might make the head crop a minor point by emphasizing the smile, etc.
Mar 3, 2016 18:50:03 #
Mar 3, 2016 20:41:50 #
dandi
Loc: near Seattle, WA
Fred Harwood wrote:
Just to show what might be an alternate crop.
Yes, I agree with you, looks better now. Thank you.
Mar 3, 2016 22:05:29 #
Mar 4, 2016 06:44:50 #
dandi wrote:
Yes, I agree with you, looks better now. Thank you.
Your's is better, perfect.
Mar 4, 2016 09:28:57 #
I was about to say that better cropping was needed when I saw the Fred Harwood version. I would have done the same cropping as he did.
Technically speaking and this could be very advanced for you, a light to separate his black hair from the background would have been a great choice.
It is a very nice shot.
Technically speaking and this could be very advanced for you, a light to separate his black hair from the background would have been a great choice.
It is a very nice shot.
Mar 4, 2016 12:58:05 #
I'd prefer a more side lighting. Too strong frontal for my portrait tastes.
Mar 4, 2016 13:05:39 #
dandi
Loc: near Seattle, WA
camerapapi wrote:
I was about to say that better cropping was needed when I saw the Fred Harwood version. I would have done the same cropping as he did.
Technically speaking and this could be very advanced for you, a light to separate his black hair from the background would have been a great choice.
It is a very nice shot.
Technically speaking and this could be very advanced for you, a light to separate his black hair from the background would have been a great choice.
It is a very nice shot.
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