Snap Shot Loc: California

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jerryc41 Loc: Catskill Mts of NY

I like those squiggly lines.

Snap Shot Loc: California

Jerry,
Thanks for stopping by!

ediesaul

#2: I love the texture you achieved in this shot. Love the lines, colors, and light. But mostly the texture. That's what really caught my attention. I like the story that I can imagine. A shuttered window with the sweeping remnants of what had been there.

#3: Having seen #2, I don't think the addition of the upstairs windows adds to the photo. If you wanted a contrast, I would have cut the extraneous parts of the photo to concentrate just on the windows. If you wanted to capture the beautiful vines and contrast them to the empty pots, I would have cut the bottom window. What is eye-catching to me is that the vine on the right side of the photo looks 3-D - amazing!!!

#5: Oh my, but the texture of that wall is something to behold!!!! Again, I also love the colors, the light, the lines. I don't know why you have the stuff on the ground on the left side of the photo. I don't think it's strong enough to be part of the frame. And, since we (i.e., I) don't know what the metal thing is since it's not shown completely, it's a distraction to me. I would have cut it out and some of the vine on the left, using the vine as a frame and keeping the center of attention on the wall and the "architecture" of the other objects in the photo. Despite all the above, I love this photo!!!!

ediesaul

Didn't see #6 before. Sorry.

It's perfect! Love your eye and your pp!!

ebbote Loc: Hockley, Texas

Edie, that metal thing is an ashtray.

ebbote Loc: Hockley, Texas

Very good series Snap.

Snap Shot Loc: California

Thanks so much for your critique! You've given me much to absorb and I really appreciate your time and effort in helping me make better compositions.
I'm redoing several photos as per your suggestions and agree 100%!
I just didn't think through the p.p. a much as I should have.
Thank you so much!!!

Snap Shot Loc: California

Thanks Ernest, as always!

rlaugh Loc: Michigan & Florida

Fine set, love the simplicity of #2!

Snap Shot Loc: California

Thanks Bob! This was a great place for photos!

DickC Loc: NE Washington state

Love the rusty doors in #2!! :D :D

Snap Shot Loc: California

Thanks for commenting Dick! It was a place filled with great shots!