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Apr 7, 2015 22:01:37   #
INshooter Loc: Indiana
 
This is my third attempt at posting this.....I guess my previous attached files were too large.
Many of you advised me on lighting for macro subjects. Attached are 3 photos representing my first attempt at using the softbox outside with my 105mm macro lens. I stood in the misty rain and shot some blossoms on my wife's Pussy Willow tree. I thought the white vignetting complemented the blossoms but I'll let you guys be judges of that. Any comments/advice/criticism appreciated.
The flash/softbox seemed to work quite well.


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Apr 7, 2015 22:03:14   #
Nikonian72 Loc: Chico CA
 
You are most welcome here!
In my opinion, the white vignette competes for my eyes' attention, detracting from the subject. Would you be so kind as to post at least one un-vignetted image?
Exif info of image #1:
Camera Model: NIKON D7100
Lens: 105.0 mm f/2.8
Image Date: 2015-04-07
Focal Length: 105mm
Aperture: ƒ/16.0
Exposure Time: 0.017 s (1/60-sec)
ISO equiv: 200
Exposure Bias: none
Metering Mode: Matrix
Exposure: aperture priority
White Balance: Manual
Light Source: Flash
Flash Fired: Yes

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Apr 7, 2015 22:10:01   #
Nikonian72 Loc: Chico CA
 
I have a few suggestions to offer:
1.) make sure the Nikon SB-600 drop-down diffuser is in front of your speedlight lens;
2.) set your SB-600 to manual output;
3.) stretched the internal cloth diffuser from side-to-side inside your softbox;
4.) select ISO 200, 1/200-sec at f/16, and adjust speedlight output for proper exposure.

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Apr 7, 2015 22:38:25   #
Blenheim Orange Loc: Michigan
 
Hard to know where to focus on those, eh? Nice work there. Douglass (Nikonian72) has some good suggestions.
Mike

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Apr 7, 2015 22:50:13   #
Muddyvalley Loc: McMinnville, Oregon
 
:thumbup:
You are off to a good start!
Follow Douglass' advice!

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Apr 8, 2015 05:01:38   #
Leicaflex Loc: Cymru
 
I agree, the vignetting is a little distracting.
Other than that, good work.

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Apr 8, 2015 07:10:56   #
Tom DePuy Loc: Waxhaw, N.C.
 
nice photo's...I too would like to see them without the vignetting.....Tom

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Apr 8, 2015 10:36:48   #
INshooter Loc: Indiana
 
Nikonian72 wrote:
You are most welcome here! In my opinion, the white vignette competes for my eyes' attention, detracting from the subject. Would you be so kind as to post at least one un-vignetted image?
Thanks for your input! I'll try those settings in the future. Here are the 3 pictures without the vignetting.


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Apr 8, 2015 10:38:55   #
INshooter Loc: Indiana
 
Blenheim Orange wrote:
Hard to know where to focus on those, eh? Nice work there. Douglass (Nikonian72) has some good suggestions.
Yes, where to focus is tricky, isn't it?
:)

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Apr 8, 2015 13:53:34   #
Muddyvalley Loc: McMinnville, Oregon
 
:thumbup: :thumbup:

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Apr 8, 2015 22:24:44   #
Nikonian72 Loc: Chico CA
 
INshooter wrote:
Here are the 3 pictures without the vignetting.
I really like the un-vignetted image #1! I now see more resolution & more detail than first post.

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Apr 8, 2015 23:09:02   #
INshooter Loc: Indiana
 
Thank you Douglass. Also thanks to all others who have commented.

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Apr 10, 2015 15:15:24   #
napabob Loc: Napa CA
 
:thumbup:

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Apr 10, 2015 22:00:42   #
Macronaut Loc: Redondo Beach,Ca.
 
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Apr 12, 2015 17:15:31   #
thephotoman Loc: Rochester, NY
 
I think all 3 shots are good. I do think the white vignette in the first two may be a little too strong. The third shot is well balanced and shows great detail. Well done for the first try.

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