Newport Bridge South #1
Feb 19, 2015 14:50:44 #
Feb 19, 2015 15:41:16 #
The slope of the bridge and the arches are pleasing to follow into the scene. I like all the verticals of the pilings as a nice counterpoint and balance. The muted colors seem appropriate for the wet side in winter :)
Are you able to get more of the top of the bridge? I'd be interested in a composition with the curves going up further. (the industrial building and materials on left are interesting, but those condos are so darned unappealing in their cookie cutter architecture!)
Are you able to get more of the top of the bridge? I'd be interested in a composition with the curves going up further. (the industrial building and materials on left are interesting, but those condos are so darned unappealing in their cookie cutter architecture!)
Feb 19, 2015 15:53:47 #
I agree on the condos, they don't quite fit. Did get a few of top o bridge but thought it distracted from the flow of the bridge across the inlet-which is the part that interested me.
Thanks for the comments!
John
Thanks for the comments!
John
Linda From Maine wrote:
The slope of the bridge and the arches are pleasing to follow into the scene. I like all the verticals of the pilings as a nice counterpoint and balance. The muted colors seem appropriate for the wet side in winter :)
Are you able to get more of the top of the bridge? I'd be interested in a composition with the curves going up further. (the industrial building and materials on left are interesting, but those condos are so darned unappealing in their cookie cutter architecture!)
Are you able to get more of the top of the bridge? I'd be interested in a composition with the curves going up further. (the industrial building and materials on left are interesting, but those condos are so darned unappealing in their cookie cutter architecture!)
Feb 19, 2015 16:56:51 #
There are some different angles that get rid of the condos and shoot north from the walking path near the brewery that leads to the fishing pier.
Feb 19, 2015 17:30:48 #
Feb 19, 2015 17:31:43 #
That was meant for you Linda!!
JoBear wrote:
Thank you for the feedback. Much appreciated.
J
J
Feb 19, 2015 20:27:13 #
lighthouse
Loc: No Fixed Abode
Sorry JoBear and everyone else.
I deleted the second image posted in this thread and any posts referencing it.
The rules of the critique section are one post per thread and no reworking.
Jo please post the second photo again as a new thread.
It was exactly the crop I was going to suggest afetr seeing the first thread, and the other comments on it were very relevant. It seems we all basically saw it very similarly.
I deleted the second image posted in this thread and any posts referencing it.
The rules of the critique section are one post per thread and no reworking.
Jo please post the second photo again as a new thread.
It was exactly the crop I was going to suggest afetr seeing the first thread, and the other comments on it were very relevant. It seems we all basically saw it very similarly.
Feb 19, 2015 20:47:43 #
No problem. Thanks will do!!
John
John
lighthouse wrote:
Sorry JoBear and everyone else.
I deleted the second image posted in this thread and any posts referencing it.
The rules of the critique section are one post per thread and no reworking.
Jo please post the second photo again as a new thread.
It was exactly the crop I was going to suggest afetr seeing the first thread, and the other comments on it were very relevant. It seems we all basically saw it very similarly.
I deleted the second image posted in this thread and any posts referencing it.
The rules of the critique section are one post per thread and no reworking.
Jo please post the second photo again as a new thread.
It was exactly the crop I was going to suggest afetr seeing the first thread, and the other comments on it were very relevant. It seems we all basically saw it very similarly.
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