Tide's Out
Nov 24, 2014 14:53:25 #
Just a low shot to capture the patterns in the sand.
Nov 24, 2014 18:04:10 #
This is AWESOME, nairiam! I love the patterns and textures in the foreground. You've got a super strong leading line. Because you've got so much interest in the beach detail, I think you could crop most of the sky out .. enough so you can lose the building and the structure with the railing. I think it would put more emphasis on the super awesome beach detail and get rid of the things that add nothing to the shot.
Nov 24, 2014 18:33:14 #
Nightski wrote:
This is AWESOME, nairiam! I love the patterns and textures in the foreground. You've got a super strong leading line. Because you've got so much interest in the beach detail, I think you could crop most of the sky out .. enough so you can lose the building and the structure with the railing. I think it would put more emphasis on the super awesome beach detail and get rid of the things that add nothing to the shot.
Thank you for your kind response. I'm never sure about the final composition. Usually I leave a lot in frame to identify the area and allow the image to tell its own story. I'll look at alternative crops, or you may freely interpret what you see.
Nov 24, 2014 18:38:04 #
Nov 25, 2014 05:51:03 #
Nightski wrote:
This is AWESOME, nairiam! I love the patterns and textures in the foreground. You've got a super strong leading line. Because you've got so much interest in the beach detail, I think you could crop most of the sky out .. enough so you can lose the building and the structure with the railing. I think it would put more emphasis on the super awesome beach detail and get rid of the things that add nothing to the shot.
I agree. Just make a really neat abstract out of it.
Nov 25, 2014 09:19:49 #
Nov 25, 2014 09:29:59 #
nairiam wrote:
The Crop.
Much better. Now get rid of the last of those rocks and you will a fine abstract :-)
Graham
Nov 25, 2014 09:43:06 #
Looks abstract now. Thanks to all advisers. If I sent it to the Tate Gallery, would I be required to include hanging instructions?
This image was meant to be included in the post
This image was meant to be included in the post
Nov 25, 2014 09:50:13 #
nairiam wrote:
Looks abstract now. Thanks to all advisers. If I sent it to the Tate Gallery, would I be required to include hanging instructions?
With the rocks in there I don't think so...
Nov 25, 2014 09:51:08 #
nairiam wrote:
Looks abstract now. Thanks to all advisers. If I sent it to the Tate Gallery, would I be required to include hanging instructions?
If the staff at the Tate can't understand the natural flow and rhythm of your picture they don't deserve to have it!
Nov 25, 2014 10:07:16 #
Nairiam ... could you please start a new thread with your edit? You know I'm goig to have to delete it per Photo Critique Section rules ... Graham ... were you in on this too?
BTW ... Nairiam .. love this crop and I totally thing Graham is right. Wow ... great capture Naiiam. Love it!
BTW ... Nairiam .. love this crop and I totally thing Graham is right. Wow ... great capture Naiiam. Love it!
Nov 25, 2014 10:12:51 #
Thank you. My last post included the final crop but never made it. Sorry for any infringement.
Nightski wrote:
Nairiam ... could you please start a new thread with your edit? You know I'm goig to have to delete it per Photo Critique Section rules ... Graham ... were you in on this too?
BTW ... Nairiam .. love this crop and I totally thing Graham is right. Wow ... great capture Naiiam. Love it!
BTW ... Nairiam .. love this crop and I totally thing Graham is right. Wow ... great capture Naiiam. Love it!
Nov 25, 2014 10:13:44 #
Nov 25, 2014 10:20:13 #
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