dat2ra wrote:
Ok, at the risk of dissention, I think compositionally, it is flawed in that the only guy working has his back to the camera and is hunched over. The other guys are just standing. While there is a strong diagonal in the foreground, it blocks the working subject. What is the "story" the photo tells? Exposure and subject matter work, especially the b&w of concrete.
Thanks thats very fair. I think I was in the wrong place really, I think if I'd have been closer to along side the truck it would have worked better. I'd be interested in suggestions of how I could have worked the scene better.
Some people might feel you're being harsh but I wouldn't have posted it if I didn't think it could be better.