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Sep 9, 2014 17:47:14   #
jack schade Loc: La Pine Oregon
 
I'm getting ready to submit this photo for our camera club critique night. The theme is "black and white." Any suggestions to make it better before I submit it to the club would be appreciated.


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Sep 9, 2014 17:53:26   #
Wild Life Loc: Sunny Southern California
 
jack schade wrote:
I'm getting ready to submit this photo for our camera club critique night. The theme is "black and white." Any suggestions to make it better before I submit it to the club would be appreciated.


Jack, it appears to have a slight sepia cast to the photo and does not look like a true black & white. Do you know how to remove the pinky/brown cast? The photo is very sharp and I love the composition. Good luck with the contest.

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Sep 9, 2014 18:01:47   #
jack schade Loc: La Pine Oregon
 
Thank you, I will remove the seipia cast

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Sep 9, 2014 18:04:22   #
Wahawk Loc: NE IA
 
Very nice as is, but if it was mine, I would probably increase the contrast just a little bit and maybe go to a full sepia treatment.

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Sep 9, 2014 18:08:49   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
Great clarity, interesting subject, nice tonal range. A winner :)

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Sep 9, 2014 19:06:24   #
Dan L Loc: Wisconsin
 
I would also crop the photo so the two building stand out more.

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Sep 9, 2014 19:53:51   #
djtravels Loc: Georgia boy now
 
Park an Edsel outside for gas. lol

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Sep 9, 2014 22:20:33   #
Wild Life Loc: Sunny Southern California
 
jack schade wrote:
Thank you, I will remove the seipia cast


Jack, I downloaded your photo, took it into Photoshop CS5, did the following. Image> Adjustments> Desaturate then back to Image> Adjustments> Levels. Brought the black slider to the right a little, white slider to the left a little and you can play with the shadow slide to make it pop. I can repost the photo if you would like to see how it came out.

The only reason I mentioned the sepia tone was in your original post you stated that the theme was, "Black and White." I think it is a great photo as it stands, with remarkable clarity.

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Sep 10, 2014 12:05:22   #
jack schade Loc: La Pine Oregon
 
Thanks for the suggestions. I'll do some work on it and then submit it.

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Sep 10, 2014 13:43:18   #
jack schade Loc: La Pine Oregon
 
I would love to have an Edsel.

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Sep 10, 2014 14:48:00   #
Kingmapix Loc: Mesa, Arizona
 
Unfortunately some of the clouds are blown out.
You might want to try to cut down on the contrast in the skies to enable seeing more of the features of the clouds. Be sure you mask out the buildings before making your adjustments to the skies.

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