I am new to this forum, but as I understand it, this is where we put photos to get honest opinions on how to make them better, so with that in mind....
It is important to keep track of your field of view and what is behind your subject.
It looks like three spines of the tent are growing out of the sunglasses of the lady on the left and one out of the sunglasses of the lady on the right.
If you had stepped a tiny bit to the right, it would have eliminated the problem with the spines, and covered the distracting light in the background.
The fact that they are blonde helped contrast them from the background, but the sunglasses on their heads didn't help the picture any.
Nice photo Will, I do not see a problem.
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