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Oct 31, 2013 20:24:13   #
minniev Loc: MIssissippi
 
Olympus OMD EM5
12-50 lens at 12mm
ISO200
1/250 at f13 (should probably have been f8 or so)

Processed in LR5, converted to monochrome in Perfect Effects

light at Port Clyde ME

Since the day was so bright and I had to catch boat at noon & couldn't wait for better light, I tried to embrace the contrast and make the shadows part of the composition.



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Oct 31, 2013 20:34:19   #
Nikonian72 Loc: Chico CA
 
I like it! Maybe crop-out 2/3 of sky above peak.

This image quality reminds me of a wrap-around book cover.

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Oct 31, 2013 20:47:41   #
CHG_CANON Loc: the Windy City
 
I really like! But, I would clone out the cloud to the right of the lighthouse and crop the bottom, if possible, to have the hand rails running equally into the bottom corners of the image.

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Oct 31, 2013 21:03:59   #
lighthouse Loc: No Fixed Abode
 
I like it.
Love the leading lines coming in evenly from the corner.
I would only change 2 very minor things.
I would like to see it framed the same but on a day without shadows.
And I would lens correct the image to take the curve out of the horizon.
Nice subject for long exposure work at high tide. Maybe after the sun has gone down.

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Oct 31, 2013 21:39:09   #
Country's Mama Loc: Michigan
 
I like it! Shadows and all. I have to agree with the suggestion to clone out the little cloud, it is so small it looks more like smudge.
I think photographed on a cloudy day would give a very different photo. I think the shadows on this day add to the image. I also like that you have brought the shadows out by using black and white.

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Nov 1, 2013 17:12:56   #
St3v3M Loc: 35,000 feet
 
Would you consider a vertical crop? Keep the height of the photo and center the lighthouse. It changes everything!

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Nov 1, 2013 21:18:42   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
It's hugely interesting to me and I prefer it with the shadows on the walkway even if I haven't seen it any other way :)

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Nov 1, 2013 21:40:59   #
smcaleer Loc: Dearborn Heights, Michigan
 
minniev wrote:
Olympus OMD EM5
12-50 lens at 12mm
ISO200
1/250 at f13 (should probably have been f8 or so)

Processed in LR5, converted to monochrome in Perfect Effects

light at Port Clyde ME

Since the day was so bright and I had to catch boat at noon & couldn't wait for better light, I tried to embrace the contrast and make the shadows part of the composition.


I love this shot. I think the lighting puts character in the photo. I like the shadows. I agree though, with cloning out that little cloud to the right of the lighthouse.

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Nov 2, 2013 22:02:52   #
MIKE GALLAGHER Loc: New Zealand
 
Lighthouse - that's not fair. Except for your horizon idea maybe. There was no time to do what you suggest otherwise so the photo's what it is. And well done at that.

minniev - the lighthouse seems to me to lean to the right. Your camera was probably a tiny bit out of level. That could be fixed by doing a 'free rotate' anticlockwise of the whole photo. In CS5 that’s: Image -> Image Rotation -> cc (that stands for ‘anticlockwise!). But it won’t be hard to find in other editors.

When you do that you may find the corners reduce the photo if you have to crop for that. But in order to avoid that I’ve filled corners in by cloning into them from close by. Then either no cropping or at least a lot less. But I reckon that’d work for you.
Mike.

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Nov 2, 2013 22:14:56   #
xphotog1 Loc: Lubbock, TX
 
minniev wrote:
Olympus OMD EM5
12-50 lens at 12mm
ISO200
1/250 at f13 (should probably have been f8 or so)

Processed in LR5, converted to monochrome in Perfect Effects

light at Port Clyde ME

Since the day was so bright and I had to catch boat at noon & couldn't wait for better light, I tried to embrace the contrast and make the shadows part of the composition.


I really like the shot. You've taken unfavorable lighting conditions and turned them into a plus.

I think you could crop some of the sky to raise your horizon line a little more, but that's not a killer.

You might considered boosting the contrast a little more to darken the shadows some.

Like the double vanishing point line.

Keep up the good work, minniev. :thumbup:

Al

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Nov 2, 2013 23:11:06   #
Bevman Loc: Baileysville, West Virginia
 
Just saw that lighthouse on tv....

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Nov 3, 2013 13:26:13   #
Photoman74 Loc: Conroe Tx
 
Monochrome and the strong lighting and shadows added quite dramatically to the image. :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup:

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Nov 3, 2013 16:37:19   #
MtnMan Loc: ID
 
minniev wrote:
Olympus OMD EM5
12-50 lens at 12mm
ISO200
1/250 at f13 (should probably have been f8 or so)

Processed in LR5, converted to monochrome in Perfect Effects

light at Port Clyde ME

Since the day was so bright and I had to catch boat at noon & couldn't wait for better light, I tried to embrace the contrast and make the shadows part of the composition.


Huh. I thought it was on "Gump Hill" in Monument Valley. I have one of my son there and was looking for another take on it.

http://www.ehow.com/how_2279285_find-forrest-gump-stopped-running.html

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Mar 8, 2015 19:16:18   #
lbrandt79 Loc: League City, Tx.
 
MtnMan wrote:
Huh. I thought it was on "Gump Hill" in Monument Valley. I have one of my son there and was looking for another take on it.

http://www.ehow.com/how_2279285_find-forrest-gump-stopped-running.html


He stopped in Monument Valley.

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