BassmanBruce, Guyserman, kpmac and bonjac: I'm very grateful for all of you taking the time to give me your honest opinions. Extremely helpful and interesting to hear.
First, please note that the second photo was for ecobin to use. It was not intended as a finished work. Bruce, have at it; would love to see your pencil sketch too! I just meant I was looking forward to Ecobins version. That’s an area I’ve yet to try.
The first one is very interesting as even without the title it is instantly recognizable and yet it’s still hard to sort out all the lines and see what goes where. I haven’t figured out how the second one appears to me. Fwiw, the pencil sketch idea is intriguing.