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What do you think could have made this photo better?
Feb 16, 2019 12:39:54 #
Los-Angeles-Shooter
Loc: Los Angeles
lose the scarf and sunglasses. and show your lovely smile and eye contact.
Feb 16, 2019 12:56:47 #
All the comments above apply. I especially dislike the cluttered background. Grab shots usually get results like this. Sorry to be so critical, but you asked......
Feb 16, 2019 14:14:26 #
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Feb 16, 2019 16:08:55 #
Bill P wrote:
Bigger boobs.
Calm down, I'm just joking.
Calm down, I'm just joking.
I think her boobs are fine. I would like to see more of them.
Feb 16, 2019 17:21:41 #
Nothing. It is perfect for what it is, an impromptu shot taken by a beautiful girl who was thinking “hey, I look pretty hot”. All the things wrong with it, make better for what it is.
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Feb 16, 2019 17:26:57 #
Natcw80 wrote:
What could make this photo better?
Me taking the picture. ;)
Feb 16, 2019 18:33:43 #
Los-Angeles-Shooter
Loc: Los Angeles
joehel2 wrote:
Nothing. It is perfect for what it is, an impromptu shot taken by a beautiful girl who was thinking “hey, I look pretty hot”. All the things wrong with it, make better for what it is.
Very insightful. There is tremendous charm in a quickie selfie of a beautiful girl.
Feb 16, 2019 19:00:24 #
I think the model is beautiful. As a "grab shot" it came out well, with a bit of post it could very well turn out very well (like color balance as an example).
Feb 16, 2019 21:47:35 #
Natcw80 wrote:
Welcome to the forum. It is a provocative image, intriguing to look at. I suggest:
No sunglasses, A simple uncluttered background sharp focus. The image is either old, or filtered to look that way as shot on film perhaps. The grain and softness is distracting and hard to overlook. How much you show of you is your business. Female photographers with the guts to publish self shot, self modeled work have not always been treated with respect here. I hope you have a positive experience.
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Feb 17, 2019 00:56:50 #
ppage wrote:
Welcome to the forum. It is a provocative image, intriguing to look at. I suggest:
No sunglasses, A simple uncluttered background sharp focus. The image is either old, or filtered to look that way as shot on film perhaps. The grain and softness is distracting and hard to overlook. How much you show of you is your business. Female photographers with the guts to publish self shot, self modeled work have not always been treated with respect here. I hope you have a positive experience.
No sunglasses, A simple uncluttered background sharp focus. The image is either old, or filtered to look that way as shot on film perhaps. The grain and softness is distracting and hard to overlook. How much you show of you is your business. Female photographers with the guts to publish self shot, self modeled work have not always been treated with respect here. I hope you have a positive experience.
Like this?
Me
Feb 17, 2019 00:58:28 #
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Feb 17, 2019 01:36:05 #
Natcw80 wrote:
Perhaps this
Yes, this photo shows intelligence and someone I'd like to know more about.
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