Hi, Richard, I think it would be improved by a crop of the top 1/3; it would enforce closer attention to detail of the subjects in front of the window as well as the well-lit detail inside. Both effects would enhance a sense-of-place of this pleasant evening scene.
Nice, Richard! The interior detail is pretty amazing for a hand-held shot.
Way too much interior for me. Overwhelms the patrons who are the real subject. The cropping is one story in itself. If you cropped tighter, you would have a different shot. Reminds me of Brassai. Thanks for posting.
Way too much interior for me. Overwhelms the patrons who are the real subject. The cropping is one story in itself. If you cropped tighter, you would have a different shot. Reminds me of Brassai. Thanks for posting.
I should clarify what I meant. The interior is too bright. I like what you have here because it tells the whole story full of wonderful and charming little details.