Susie and her parasol
Photographed on Agfa ASA400 short dated film using family room doorwall as single light source. Exposure determined using a incident meter reading. All black background.
These are are nice, Harry--the lighting, the soft focus, and the grain.
JohnFrim
Loc: Somewhere in the Great White North.
These are really nice.
But I wonder in the first two how they would look if you cloned out the white parasol showing under her left arm. These bright patches are a bit distracting; maybe if they were larger to really see that they are the parasol they would be less bothersome to me.
Idid think about removing that spot, but.... What do you think?
JohnFrim
Loc: Somewhere in the Great White North.
DIRTY HARRY wrote:
Idid think about removing that spot, but.... What do you think?
Yup... I don't miss the spot at all.
That young lady looks to me like she is having a enjoyable time.
i like them, my only complaint, the cropping off of her hand.
Susie and her parasol
Yes, the Parasol and Flowers speak of her innocents.
DIRTY HARRY wrote:
Susie and her parasol
Photographed on Agfa ASA400 short dated film using family room doorwall as single light source. Exposure determined using a incident meter reading. All black background.
The smooth version #2 is so much easier on the eyes to look at.
ski
Loc: West Coast, USA
Excellent! The softness makes me want to look closer...
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