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Jul 11, 2021 19:27:16   #
wayne-03 Loc: Minnesota
 
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Jul 11, 2021 20:41:13   #
PixelStan77 Loc: Vermont/Chicago
 
wayne-03 wrote:
Tiffany


Second images works for me because of great eye contact

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Jul 12, 2021 06:30:46   #
tshift Loc: Overland Park, KS.
 
wayne-03 wrote:
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WOW! What a beautiful women!! You captured her very well, I like both photos. Beautiful smile and the eyes. Post more when you can. Tell your model she was made for the camera and GOD gave here the look. Thanks BE SAFE!!

Tom

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Jul 12, 2021 07:36:29   #
jaymatt Loc: Alexandria, Indiana
 
Both of these work well for me--the fun side of the girl and the classic side.

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Jul 12, 2021 07:51:18   #
wayne-03 Loc: Minnesota
 
tshift wrote:
WOW! What a beautiful women!! You captured her very well, I like both photos. Beautiful smile and the eyes. Post more when you can. Tell your model she was made for the camera and GOD gave here the look. Thanks BE SAFE!!

Tom


I did a shoot with Tiffany last Friday; she is currently a contestant in the Miss Minnesota Beauty Pageant. I’m trying to get my photography business off the ground and hoping to get more work with Tiffany and other contestants in the future. These photos were to highlight the ear rings.

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Jul 12, 2021 07:59:10   #
tshift Loc: Overland Park, KS.
 
wayne-03 wrote:
I did a shoot with Tiffany last Friday; she is currently a contestant in the Miss Minnesota Beauty Pageant. I’m trying to get my photography business off the ground and hoping to get more work with Tiffany and other contestants in the future. These photos were to highlight the ear rings.


They go well with that beautiful face!!

Tom

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Jul 12, 2021 08:29:53   #
dpullum Loc: Tampa Florida
 
Photo 1... two years after graduating from Highschool, "The girls always thought you were a boring math instructor, but you taught me a few lessons!!!"

She has that really sly impish girl look.

Photo 2 is an excellent normal look portrait. mom would approve

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Jul 12, 2021 08:40:11   #
tshift Loc: Overland Park, KS.
 
wayne-03 wrote:
I did a shoot with Tiffany last Friday; she is currently a contestant in the Miss Minnesota Beauty Pageant. I’m trying to get my photography business off the ground and hoping to get more work with Tiffany and other contestants in the future. These photos were to highlight the ear rings.


Like I said these are beautiful shots. Just a thought, I don't think the DOF is right. Wonderful focus on the eyes but not enough on the ear rings. Probably f/8 or better. Thanks BE SAFE!!

Tom

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Jul 12, 2021 12:21:32   #
dpullum Loc: Tampa Florida
 
tshift wrote:
Like I said these are beautiful shots. Just a thought, I don't think the DOF is right. Wonderful focus on the eyes but not enough on the ear rings. Probably f/8 or better. Thanks BE SAFE!! Tom


Tom, the EXIF shows f/8 and fast speed 1/160, the hair just behind the earring, the photo left, is in focus. I think it is the dazzle effect of the material of which the earring is made. Looking at the earring on the right side of the photo it looks in focus. I'm I right, or my old eyes are failing me?

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Jul 12, 2021 18:08:53   #
tshift Loc: Overland Park, KS.
 
dpullum wrote:
Tom, the EXIF shows f/8 and fast speed 1/160, the hair just behind the earring, the photo left, is in focus. I think it is the dazzle effect of the material of which the earring is made. Looking at the earring on the right side of the photo it looks in focus. I'm I right, or my old eyes are failing me?


You are probably right! I know what you are talking about I turn 70 the 22nd. Thanks BE SAFE!

Tom

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Jul 12, 2021 20:27:20   #
wayne-03 Loc: Minnesota
 
tshift wrote:
You are probably right! I know what you are talking about I turn 70 the 22nd. Thanks BE SAFE!

Tom


I've got ten years on you.

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Jul 15, 2021 20:08:16   #
Jim-Pops Loc: Granbury, Texas
 
I enjoyed both of your photos. I think adding a little sharpening to her earrings would help since you wanted to highlight them.
In my opinion you were a little heavy handed, eliminated too much shadow, with your pp on her neck in the second picture. I can tell you did some work because it is so smooth. Sometimes when doing a lot of correction the area gets too smooth. To counter that you can add just 1.0 of noise getting the area noise about the same as the rest of the image.

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Jul 16, 2021 09:10:54   #
Electric Gnome Loc: Norwich UK
 
Jim-Pops wrote:
I enjoyed both of your photos. I think adding a little sharpening to her earrings would help since you wanted to highlight them.
In my opinion you were a little heavy handed, eliminated too much shadow, with your pp on her neck in the second picture. I can tell you did some work because it is so smooth. Sometimes when doing a lot of correction the area gets too smooth. To counter that you can add just 1.0 of noise getting the area noise about the same as the rest of the image.



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