An experiment in the natural light art nude genre.
I made this a little more challenging by socially distancing with a longer, slower lens, in the lower light levels of a dim and rainy evening.
Beautifully lit and posed. Very nicely done.
JohnFrim
Loc: Somewhere in the Great White North.
I would crop a bit of the left side of the image to centre the models. This would help them stand out a bit more against the background which is just a bit too similar in tone to the skin of the ladies.
BB4A wrote:
An experiment in the natural light art nude genre.
I made this a little more challenging by socially distancing with a longer, slower lens, in the lower light levels of a dim and rainy evening.
Inspired by Bob Dylan...Rainy Day Women.
So nice to see that some one else is being modern and doing naughty girl on girl fun shoots.
Me: I'm Stuck Inside Mobil, With the Memphis Blues Again!
Keep at it, I am impressed!
Nice. I agree with JohnFrim of the lack of separation. Assuming that you have no control over the background light, you could use a fill light on the ladies and re-adjust your exposure to them. (Or in PS cut a mask and drop the exposure on the background).
dat2ra wrote:
Nice. I agree with JohnFrim of the lack of separation. Assuming that you have no control over the background light, you could use a fill light on the ladies and re-adjust your exposure to them. (Or in PS cut a mask and drop the exposure on the background).
Or you might just realize that a photograph is an event related in time, and you can not return to that moment because it is gone. Over all I feel the photographer captured the fleeting moment between two people just fine. It is a moment between the emotive respons of two people bound up in the transient event.
Or more simply this is not a still life, "Should I move the pear, it doesn't quite balance with thee apple and banana, hummmmm, what to do for a better capture?"
Well done, hope to see more.
Don
JohnFrim wrote:
I would crop a bit of the left side of the image to centre the models. This would help them stand out a bit more against the background which is just a bit too similar in tone to the skin of the ladies.
Agree with the crop of the left side of the photo. Provides no benefit. Serves no purpose in adding to the image for the couple (primary point of interest). (Use your hand. Block out part of the left of the image with your hand. You will see the reason and benefit from cropping.)
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