Edge of Light
Jul 26, 2019 11:44:03 #
I will post additional information about this shot if asked. Please Critique.
Jim
Jim
Jul 26, 2019 12:29:08 #
I really enjoyed this image Jim. I like that it's black and white, so that color doesn't interfere with the simplicity of the light graphic. I like the way you shaded the light, the fact it's off centered, and it has a base to ground it. Wonderful work. Bev
Jul 26, 2019 14:36:58 #
Jul 26, 2019 17:55:48 #
Jul 27, 2019 09:51:45 #
It's beautiful! Personally, I would like the extra negative space to be on the left instead of on the right. I'm not sure why.
Jul 27, 2019 12:40:07 #
Jim, this is a great image. Subtle, yet well defined and imaginative.
--Bob
--Bob
Jim-Pops wrote:
I will post additional information about this shot if asked. Please Critique.
Jim
Jim
Jul 27, 2019 16:22:42 #
AzPicLady wrote:
It's beautiful! Personally, I would like the extra negative space to be on the left instead of on the right. I'm not sure why.
Thank you Kathy. The only way that I know to add more space to the left is to expand & clone the black along with the table top white light. The problem is the slit of light opening has to be close to the paper or else it will spread. I have a shot of this wider spread of light but it becomes something much different. You might like it, I might post later and give you a heads up.
Jul 27, 2019 16:24:10 #
rmalarz wrote:
Jim, this is a great image. Subtle, yet well defined and imaginative.
--Bob
--Bob
Thank you Bob. I'm thinking about entering it in a show therefor asking for opinions.
Jul 27, 2019 17:08:40 #
Jim-Pops wrote:
Thank you Kathy. The only way that I know to add more space to the left is to expand & clone the black along with the table top white light. The problem is the slit of light opening has to be close to the paper or else it will spread. I have a shot of this wider spread of light but it becomes something much different. You might like it, I might post later and give you a heads up.
Thanks! Actually, I looked at it upside down, also. That puts the larger negative space on the left. Somehow that seemed better to me. Maybe because I'm a leftie?
Jul 27, 2019 17:39:00 #
AzPicLady wrote:
Thanks! Actually, I looked at it upside down, also. That puts the larger negative space on the left. Somehow that seemed better to me. Maybe because I'm a leftie?
I didn't think to flip it. It definitely makes a difference.
Jul 27, 2019 21:23:46 #
The sinuous curve adds a sense of wonder and peacefulness. Im a fan of visual simplicity and graphic design elements so this appeals greatly to me
Jul 28, 2019 21:32:25 #
Jul 29, 2019 10:33:50 #
Strodav
Loc: Houston, Tx
We all look at many, many photos in a week and pass over most of them in just a second or two. When I saw this image, I had to take it to full screen, stare at it and take it in. Nice work.
Jul 29, 2019 10:40:22 #
Strodav wrote:
We all look at many, many photos in a week and pass over most of them in just a second or two. When I saw this image, I had to take it to full screen, stare at it and take it in. Nice work.
Thanks so much, now that's the sort of reaction I was hoping to get.
Aug 1, 2019 18:06:30 #
Jim, kudos on...
A fascinating, absorbing...and the most gently impactful image I’ve had the pleasure to quietly ... and slowly ... and appreciatively view in a very long time.
Definitely better than my blood pressure meds!
Hogarth would be pleased!
Dave
A fascinating, absorbing...and the most gently impactful image I’ve had the pleasure to quietly ... and slowly ... and appreciatively view in a very long time.
Definitely better than my blood pressure meds!
Hogarth would be pleased!
Dave
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