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May 30, 2019 16:49:40   #
Robertven Loc: Fort Worth
 
Urban tunnel. Critiques welcome. Trying to learn. Thanks


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May 31, 2019 10:13:30   #
camerapapi Loc: Miami, Fl.
 
I am going to give you a hint but each one of us is different and has different ways to see a subject.

In this particular case and considering the angle of view you have used it could have given more impact to the image waiting for those autos to be in the darker areas. I do not know if it is the law to have the lights on when entering the tunnel but if it is the bright lights enhance the composition.
I was not there but a wide angle and getting closer could also offer a different perspective, perhaps an interesting one. Another try at twilight, if possible, could also offer a different view perhaps more eye catching.

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May 31, 2019 10:22:46   #
Robertven Loc: Fort Worth
 
camerapapi wrote:
I am going to give you a hint but each one of us is different and has different ways to see a subject.

In this particular case and considering the angle of view you have used it could have given more impact to the image waiting for those autos to be in the darker areas. I do not know if it is the law to have the lights on when entering the tunnel but if it is the bright lights enhance the composition.
I was not there but a wide angle and getting closer could also offer a different perspective, perhaps an interesting one. Another try at twilight, if possible, could also offer a different view perhaps more eye catching.
I am going to give you a hint but each one of us i... (show quote)


Good feedback. I might go back there and try out your suggestions. Thanks very much!

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May 31, 2019 15:14:37   #
Dannj
 
Might be more appealing if you positioned yourself more to the left so the column dividing the traffic was centered providing an equal view of each side.

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May 31, 2019 18:57:20   #
Robertven Loc: Fort Worth
 
Dannj wrote:
Might be more appealing if you positioned yourself more to the left so the column dividing the traffic was centered providing an equal view of each side.


You may be right. I thought it might be more interesting if not quite symmetrical. Thanks for the input!

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May 31, 2019 19:51:47   #
Dannj
 
Robertven wrote:
You may be right. I thought it might be more interesting if not quite symmetrical. Thanks for the input!


You’re welcome! No “right or wrong” takes here, just different😊

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