Contrary to what has been going on outside my window (IN MAY FOR GOD'S SAKE) there is a season called summer and it usually comes around about once a year!
Yep--right there under God's blue sky in my back yard! (Oooops the wife would say OUR back yard)
I like the first shot...that one is the story-teller.
Great set of pictures. I especially like the atmosphere that the photos give to the story.
Not usually a fan of B/W but these are very emotive and your model is quite beautiful..Well done both of you.
JohnFrim
Loc: Somewhere in the Great White North.
There is a bad placement of something in the background of photo 1 that makes it look like the model has huge nose.
Nice series, especially #1, however in the other three I have never been a fan of following the rule of thirds when doing a vignette.
vertigo wrote:
Contrary to what has been going on outside my window (IN MAY FOR GOD'S SAKE) there is a season called summer and it usually comes around about once a year!
Yep--right there under God's blue sky in my back yard! (Oooops the wife would say OUR back yard)
For a full figured woman, she is quite attractive. To model it in nature adds to that attraction.
Nice set of pics.
vertigo wrote:
Contrary to what has been going on outside my window (IN MAY FOR GOD'S SAKE) there is a season called summer and it usually comes around about once a year!
Yep--right there under God's blue sky in my back yard! (Oooops the wife would say OUR back yard)
A very nice set of images!!!!
Your subject is lovely, what I sometimes refer to as a "real woman".
I must agree with John Frim about the distraction in image #1, I find the drive in the background to be a little distracting, but not enough to ruin the images.
JohnFrim wrote:
There is a bad placement of something in the background of photo 1 that makes it look like the model has huge nose.
yup, first thing I saw...
Beautiful set, good subject and setting for B&W and the vignetting. Thanks.
Nice work on these--good processing.
In images 2 and 4 I am distracted by the fact she is intently looking at something out of frame, causing me to want to see what it is she is looking at (bad grammar!). I feel images 2 and 4 would hold my interest better if she were more introspective and projected her enjoyment of the bath; as in images 1 and 3.
Very well done!
Nice Set. Simple retouch needed in #1 as noted by JohnFirm.
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