Upon my initial submission, I received a "welcome to the dark side" greeting. I fully understood the comment and took my chances with a second posting to less than lukewarm reception by some. Overall, the commentary has been professional. For those, I am extend my profound appreciation.
Here I go again!
I like the pose, the hair, and eyes. If there is black to be had at the top, I would slide the framing up to give less black at the bottom, more black at the top. If you're running into the limits of the actual image, you could just throw it on a blank image and create the black at the top and recrop.
You have redeemed yourself.
It is what it is.
JohnFrim
Loc: Somewhere in the Great White North.
I scree with ISO... it needs a bit more black background at the top for balance. But keep them coming...
Beautifully done. Love the pose and set up, thanks for sharing it.
Find this shot equally fascinating if it is flipped 180°, maybe even more intriguing. You are back on track.
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