First, thank you again Linda, Donna, Earl, Sue and Johnny for your helpful suggestions. I believe I've incorporated all in the following set and do like it better. I'll show the original and and then three with the modifications.
ORIGINAL: This is in the "vivid" mode which for some reason is the default with In-Camera Keystone correction, giving it that slightly over-baked look.
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Increased light in the lower half to better show chisels and switched to the "Natural" mode for more accurate color.
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B&W with above changes.
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The camera has a mode called "Gentle Sepia" used here. It cannot be used with Keystone Correction so I'll have to do in PP. I do like it and it fits the time period of the subject.
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John from gpwmi wrote:
First, thank you again Linda, Donna, Earl, Sue and Johnny for your helpful suggestions. I believe I've incorporated all in the following set and do like it better. I'll show the original and and then three with the modifications.
Nice job and it seems you are enjoying that camera. Keep up the good work.
John, this is quite an interesting still life and has an incredible amount of potential.
--Bob
John from gpwmi wrote:
First, thank you again Linda, Donna, Earl, Sue and Johnny for your helpful suggestions. I believe I've incorporated all in the following set and do like it better. I'll show the original and and then three with the modifications.
Thanks Janos, Nice to have folks out there who can give really good advice.
Thanks Bob. It's been a good learning experience and nice to have knowledgeable people to comment and give suggestions. I'm still open for more, if you have any thoughts on it.
Beautiful still life work, John, and I'm so glad you posted your original and this followup post to closeup! I look forward to seeing more of your work.
The sepia lends just the right touch - very nice!
Definitely like the sepia - I was going to suggest converting to sepia until I read your full post. Very nice work!
alliebess wrote:
Definitely like the sepia - I was going to suggest converting to sepia until I read your full post. Very nice work!
Thank you Alliebess. It was a fun exercise with great UHH's suggestions.
Thank you Chuck. It was a fun exercise with great UHH's suggestions.
John, here's my interpretation of the original color version. There is lot of luminosity masking and adjustments, as well as selective burning and dodging. Finally, an overall vignette centered on the light. Then for the final touch, I gave it a very light sepia toning.
--Bob
John from gpwmi wrote:
Thanks Bob. It's been a good learning experience and nice to have knowledgeable people to comment and give suggestions. I'm still open for more, if you have any thoughts on it.
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