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Mar 14, 2019 16:03:47   #
katatl
 
I took this pic several years ago with a Nikon Coolpix. Recently imported it into lightroom and just removed a couple of distracting signs and cropped it a bit. Would appreciate comments. Thanks


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Mar 14, 2019 16:08:13   #
ricardo7 Loc: Washington, DC - Santiago, Chile
 
I would try three things:
1. Crop some of the right side of the picture.
2. Convert to B&W
3. Apply a light sepia tone.

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Mar 14, 2019 16:19:53   #
CHG_CANON Loc: the Windy City
 
I like it. The exposure and white balance are very nice. It does seem you've softened the details a bit in the noise processing and I think maybe there's some details you can recover by revisiting the sharpening. Try using the masking option, if not already.

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Mar 14, 2019 16:28:16   #
katatl
 
ricardo7 wrote:
I would try three things:
1. Crop some of the right side of the picture.
2. Convert to B&W
3. Apply a light sepia tone.


I like this too



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Mar 14, 2019 16:36:05   #
ricardo7 Loc: Washington, DC - Santiago, Chile
 
Can we download and play with it??

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Mar 14, 2019 17:07:21   #
katatl
 
CHG_CANON wrote:
I like it. The exposure and white balance are very nice. It does seem you've softened the details a bit in the noise processing and I think maybe there's some details you can recover by revisiting the sharpening. Try using the masking option, if not already.


Thank you. I did and it does look better (I think).


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Mar 14, 2019 17:08:14   #
katatl
 
ricardo7 wrote:
Can we download and play with it??


Sure. Have at it

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Mar 14, 2019 17:51:17   #
ricardo7 Loc: Washington, DC - Santiago, Chile
 
katatl wrote:
Sure. Have at it


Just an idea.



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Mar 14, 2019 21:34:14   #
katatl
 
ricardo7 wrote:
Just an idea.


I like it. How'd you do that?

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Mar 15, 2019 11:33:37   #
ricardo7 Loc: Washington, DC - Santiago, Chile
 
katatl wrote:
I like it. How'd you do that?


I used Lightroom. After cropping I added some black,
adjusted the white and highlight sliders to get some
texture in the sand but still keep it light. I lowered
the shadow slider to show more detail in the sky and
increased the clarity slider which increased the contrast
in the midtone values. Lastly, I used the vignette to
darken the border of the picture.

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Mar 15, 2019 23:23:19   #
Pysanka Artist Loc: Rochester, NY
 
My eye finds it hard to focus on something -- the stairs or the driftwood.

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Mar 20, 2019 16:00:49   #
Nightski
 
I think the mono color version makes it more cohesive.

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