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Playing with Camera Motion--need opinions
Mar 10, 2019 20:16:18   #
treadwl Loc: South Florida
 
I was playing around trying to master a technique. The one with the maple leaf Ihope conveys the impression of a falling leaf. I know I should have gotten rid of the white part but this was just a learning process. Did it work? What do you think?

The second was just a variation shooting through the trees. But i like the circular look. The white was a cloud that kept blowing through. If I do it again I thinkI would use an all blue sky. Any thoughts?


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Mar 10, 2019 23:34:44   #
Cwilson341 Loc: Central Florida
 
Larry, I particularly like the second shot. It makes me think of a reflection in ripples in water.

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Mar 11, 2019 06:44:30   #
joehel2 Loc: Cherry Hill, NJ
 
Very nicely done, keep it up. I like them both but I am also more partial to the second photo, I think the circular look resonates more with me.

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Mar 11, 2019 08:49:13   #
manofhg Loc: Knoxville, TN
 
I wonder if there would be appeal to put a sharply focused leaf in the center of the rings of the second pic?

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Mar 12, 2019 16:02:41   #
R.G. Loc: Scotland
 
treadwl wrote:
.....The one with the maple leaf I hope conveys the impression of a falling leaf....


The leaf is the sharpest thing in the frame, which gives the impression that it's the only stationary thing in the frame. The background looks interesting in a surreal sort of way, and the shot as a whole looks like a leaf floating downstream.

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Mar 12, 2019 17:58:00   #
lensbaby007 Loc: Ohio
 
Larry, I really like both of your shots, and I think they're very good for just playing around. What technique were you using?

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Mar 19, 2019 13:22:52   #
treadwl Loc: South Florida
 
lensbaby007 wrote:
Larry, I really like both of your shots, and I think they're very good for just playing around. What technique were you using?


In the first shot--I held the leaf on a long fine wire taped to the lens barrel and focused on the leaf using an aperture of f22. Then, using a long exposure (1/5 second), I moved the camera downward during the exposure.

For the circular look, I focused on the trees while pointing the camera upward. I attached a ND filter to slow down the shutter speed and then while using a 1/2 second exposure I rotated the camera 90 degrees to the right during the exposure.

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Mar 19, 2019 13:24:16   #
treadwl Loc: South Florida
 
Cwilson341 wrote:
Larry, I particularly like the second shot. It makes me think of a reflection in ripples in water.


Interesting comment. Not the effect I was going for, but an interesting observation.

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Mar 19, 2019 13:24:40   #
treadwl Loc: South Florida
 
joehel2 wrote:
Very nicely done, keep it up. I like them both but I am also more partial to the second photo, I think the circular look resonates more with me.


Thanks for your thoughts.

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Mar 19, 2019 13:25:22   #
treadwl Loc: South Florida
 
manofhg wrote:
I wonder if there would be appeal to put a sharply focused leaf in the center of the rings of the second pic?


Interesting idea but Idon't know how I would do that since I'm moving the camera.

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Mar 20, 2019 15:42:39   #
Nightski
 
R.G. wrote:
The leaf is the sharpest thing in the frame, which gives the impression that it's the only stationary thing in the frame. The background looks interesting in a surreal sort of way, and the shot as a whole looks like a leaf floating downstream.


I think R.G has come upon the thing that gets in the way of the idea of a falling leaf. Why not lay on your back and shoot falling leaves in Autumn? It might help you get a sense of how to recreate that look. I was out with my camera during a blizzard when I noticed leaves blowing across the snow. I had walked up a hill and they were at eye level so I started trying to capture them. I did get one relatively sharp, but when I got the pic up on my computer, it didn't look like a leaf moving across the snow. It looked like a floating leaf. I realizes this was because there was no motion blur. I would have had to pan the leaf, which would have been impossible. I did put some artificial motion blur on the background and it helped. I think your issue is ... How can you pan a leaf moving toward you? The answer to that question will tell you how to create the illusion. Let me know if you'd like to see my leaf attempt. It's pretty much as you'd expect though.

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Mar 21, 2019 07:22:15   #
treadwl Loc: South Florida
 
Nightski wrote:
I think R.G has come upon the thing that gets in the way of the idea of a falling leaf. Why not lay on your back and shoot falling leaves in Autumn? It might help you get a sense of how to recreate that look. I was out with my camera during a blizzard when I noticed leaves blowing across the snow. I had walked up a hill and they were at eye level so I started trying to capture them. I did get one relatively sharp, but when I got the pic up on my computer, it didn't look like a leaf moving across the snow. It looked like a floating leaf. I realizes this was because there was no motion blur. I would have had to pan the leaf, which would have been impossible. I did put some artificial motion blur on the background and it helped. I think your issue is ... How can you pan a leaf moving toward you? The answer to that question will tell you how to create the illusion. Let me know if you'd like to see my leaf attempt. It's pretty much as you'd expect though.
I think R.G has come upon the thing that gets in t... (show quote)


I just happened to be out for a walk with my camera last week when this idea struck me. So I played around with it. I agree it would look better in autumn, sadly it was not autumn. I'll try again next fall.

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