Day of the Dead
Oct 9, 2018 02:28:59 #
Critique this please
a little Photoshop on this one with a point and shoot mirrorless camera
in raw file format
thanks
ron
a little Photoshop on this one with a point and shoot mirrorless camera
in raw file format
thanks
ron
Oct 9, 2018 13:33:03 #
I think this a pretty good image- interesting.... I like the colors- being muted doesn't bother me- and composition works just fine... the small skull is the lightest and most attention getting part of the image; if was the same tone as the "face" is now, and the face lightened up, the viewer's eye would spend more time in the middle. That'd also give a little "oomph" to cheek/chin/nose highlights- they don't need much, just enough to entertain the eye. The tip of the mantilla is distracting because it's not attached to anything and very dark against a light background.... I'd remove it... and tone down that butterfly wing near it. Also, I'm wondering if the face's eyes shouldn't be black and without obvious eyeballs. Depends on what you're trying to portray... a participant in DotD, or a spirit during DotD. The earring, butterfly and spider are all OK. That's my take... others in the world will disagree...
Oct 9, 2018 15:49:34 #
sound good ill try it Lighter face and skull definitely,
yes the butterfly kinda always bothered me
black eyeballs How gastly and wonderfully scary
thanks
ron
yes the butterfly kinda always bothered me
black eyeballs How gastly and wonderfully scary
thanks
ron
Oct 10, 2018 11:30:29 #
I think I agree with what's been said. I'd like to see it revised - and if you can, click the "store original" so we can see it enlarged in download. Thanks!
Oct 10, 2018 12:30:18 #
i cant figure out how to put the new one in the same posting
thanks
ron
thanks
ron
Oct 10, 2018 14:18:45 #
Redron wrote:
i cant figure out how to put the new one in the same posting
thanks
ron
thanks
ron
I'm not always good at this either. But, I think if you go to your original post and hit "reply" it will bring up a screen where you can attach a new image.
Oct 10, 2018 15:28:16 #
All right thanks I’ve written to the administrator to see how to do that I’ll try that thanks
Oct 11, 2018 04:02:45 #
AzPicLady wrote:
I'm not always good at this either. But, I think if you go to your original post and hit "reply" it will bring up a screen where you can attach a new image.
Use the Quote Reply option rather than Quick Reply and you can attach the revised photo.
Oct 11, 2018 12:03:08 #
this is an update based on critique I like it better Thanks for the help.
Oct 11, 2018 12:04:15 #
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