Carolina Loyola-Garcia of Alba Flamenca Dance Troupe in Pittsburgh PA. Picture taken at the annual Roberto Clemente Fund Raiser.
Nice pose. Warm up the temp a bit to soften the harsh light
I agree on warming the temperature. I would also like to see the framing straightened. The door frame is screaming it is crooked.
I like #2 much better for composition and impact. But I don't like the flash shadows, even though they may be minor. The poses are much stronger than #1.
My critiques are actually minor compared to the quality of the shots. Both are very good. Thanks for sharing.