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Mar 12, 2018 14:02:35   #
vicksart Loc: Novato, CA -earthquake country
 
I think the composition is a bit stronger in the first with the end of the bridge closer to 1/3 from the top. You could crop off some of the bottom of the second image to keep the far end of the bridge closer to 1/3 from the bottom so it's not so close to the center. This is really very subjective, and others have very valid reasons for liking one over the other. My first reaction was in favor of the second shot until I started a more in depth analysis of subject placement.

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Mar 12, 2018 15:15:21   #
dreklaw Loc: Tucson
 
Second one is my preference.

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Mar 12, 2018 15:34:32   #
Photolady2014 Loc: Southwest Colorado
 
MJKilpatrick wrote:
Hi Photolady2014,

I think the first has more impact, the scene seems to favor foreground texture than background texture (sky) in that the texture of the bridge seems more predominant than the need for more inclusion of the sky. Simply stated, as a viewer, I do not need more sky (as shown in the second photo) to have its impression sit on me but on the second my impression is that I am missing something about the bridge. The first internally frames out the key aspect of the distant mountains as well as providing a very powerful aspect of leading lines to that background element just about where the features of the photograph balance for me. The second has that same framing and leading line effect but my eye wants to first follow those leading lines downward, searching for more of the foreground texture of the bridge. In both, my eye travels to that main mountain features and then moves left or right along the mountain range edge of the photo.....and in both I get looped back to the bottom. The first photo brings me to it while providing enough sky as my eye travels across the mountain range to know the sky and appreciate its aspect in the photo but also starts me with a strong aspect of the foreground textures in the bridge that does not want my eye to hesitate (traveling first downward to the bottom edge of the photo then along the leading lines to the rear mountain range). The second starts me off feeling I want to see more of that foreground (bridge texture) so in the second I hesitate a bit before my eye moves to the key aspect in the rear mountain range. Simply, for me as the viewer, my eye moves naturally and easily through the aspects of the the first photo and then comes back around (looped) to the bottom edge, following the left and right sides of the frame after my eye moves left or right along the mountain range......either direction, I end up at the bottom and looped back into the photo without the flow being disrupted. In the second, I first stall at the bottom edge with my eye wanting to go down outside the bottom edge in search of more foreground, eventually moving along those leading lines to the key mountain feature but when I am drawn along the mountain range (left or right) my eye again becomes indecisive when I come to the left or right borders of the frame as that additional sky space makes my eyes want to go up first before backtracking down along the edge of the photo versus travel directly back down the left or right edges of the frame back to the bottom. Eventually when back to the bottom of the second photo I get stalled out and indecisive again when I meet the start of the foreground textures of the bridge wanting to again follow those leading lines down a bit before following them up in the photos. But on the first photo, I find no indecision at the bottom of the photo, follow the leading lines to the key mountain feature then when following the mountain range left or right, have not indecision about following the left/right side of the frame back to the bottom where I am immediately drawn back into the photo first by the foreground textures of the bridge and then the leading lines to the key mountain feature and then along the mountain range back down the outer edge of the photo to he bottom and back into the photo again. So, I like the first. I hope this makes sense, sometimes difficult to explain how one is reacting to elements in a photo as individual components and then as a whole experience. With My Best,
Hi Photolady2014, br br I think the first has mor... (show quote)


Thanks for putting so much thought into your response! I appreciate it!

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Mar 12, 2018 15:41:11   #
Ben's nana Loc: Chesterland, Ohio
 
Both Are good , but I think #1 is better because more dead space in sky on number 2 and the end of walkway is almost center

Fran

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Mar 12, 2018 16:09:43   #
SAVH Loc: La Jolla, CA
 
I vote for #2. It really seems to move one into the picture and up to the mountains. Nice work!

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Mar 12, 2018 16:14:32   #
donziska
 
I vote for #2. It seems to have a little more detail in the darker areas ie the land between the bridge and mountains. Both are quite good, wish I were there. Don Z.

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Mar 12, 2018 17:28:46   #
m43rebel
 
Both good crops. If you want to emphasize the bridge, the first picture seems to do that. If you want a balance between the bridge, mountains, and clouds, the second does that better. Choosing between two good approaches ... a dilemma.

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Mar 12, 2018 17:38:07   #
cessnalvr Loc: West virginia
 
Like them both if the sale is that good just have both done

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Mar 12, 2018 19:58:00   #
ChackbayGuy Loc: South Louisiana
 
J-SPEIGHT wrote:
Hard to pick. Both are excellent.


I'm in for #1 because of the 1/3 rule. However, the bridge does draw you to the center of the picture. Off to one side may have been better. Like the sky and mountains most in #1. Both are great.

By the way, composition is my lowest ranked talent, so beware of my opinion. Love B&W shots, because no "color" to prop up the image.

I'd hang either one proudly... Have fun... John

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Mar 12, 2018 20:05:19   #
DeanS Loc: Capital City area of North Carolina
 
Mtnjerry wrote:
I like the first one because the cables come together right at the edge of the print, providing a natural termination. The second one lets the one pair of cables lead the eye off the page. Nice shot in any case.


Agree.

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Mar 12, 2018 20:10:59   #
Carolina Wings Loc: Flew from North Carolina to Pennsylvania
 
Photolady2014 wrote:
I want to put this on a canvas, not sure which is best crop is the best? Help please!

The first makes me feel more on the bridge, the second I like the lines up of the cables...

Canvas on Demand is having a great sale by the way!


Definitely the second one

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Mar 12, 2018 23:28:12   #
RolandDieter
 
First one. The bridge does a beautiful job of leading the eye to the mountain. This gives a much better, to me, sense of place.

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Mar 13, 2018 03:30:02   #
Drive by Shooter
 
def #2

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Mar 13, 2018 07:41:12   #
Nikonman44
 
Photolady2014 wrote:
I want to put this on a canvas, not sure which is best crop is the best? Help please!

The first makes me feel more on the bridge, the second I like the lines up of the cables...

Canvas on Demand is having a great sale by the way!


My personal choice is number two because it takes you through the foto. it rides down and at the other side of the bridge it takes you up like a roller coaster and you can feel like you are shooting toward the mountain in the background..BUT its only one persons view.

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Mar 13, 2018 10:05:02   #
DanielB Loc: San Diego, Ca
 
I prefer how the lower one that starts drawing the eye further up the cable. The trade off is that the sky is not as interesting at the top of the frame. Still a nice shot though either way.

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