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Feb 7, 2018 19:32:00 #
We were shooting near a flood control dam in Albuquerque, and I liked the strong lines. Then I added DAP with a lighter hand than my previous post.
Feb 7, 2018 21:34:06 #
Nice pose. Would be better if you hit the store image box. Would be better if she was wearing stilettos or you can see her feet.
Feb 8, 2018 01:14:46 #
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Feb 8, 2018 07:13:56 #
What is the subject? The dam or the model? And they would be clearer and better if you hit the store image box.
Feb 8, 2018 07:47:22 #
Feb 8, 2018 07:55:06 #
dustywing wrote:
What is the subject? The dam or the model? And they would be clearer and better if you hit the store image box.
agreed -
Feb 8, 2018 08:49:25 #
buckwheat wrote:
We were shooting near a flood control dam in Albuquerque, and I liked the strong lines. Then I added DAP with a lighter hand than my previous post.
I would have cropped off the upper third, using the construction as a frame for the model. As it stands, the lines take away from the model.
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Feb 8, 2018 11:12:44 #
Feb 8, 2018 11:32:41 #
dustywing wrote:
What is the subject? The dam or the model? And they would be clearer and better if you hit the store image box.
Same here.
Feb 8, 2018 15:11:27 #
buckwheat wrote:
We were shooting near a flood control dam in Albuquerque, and I liked the strong lines. Then I added DAP with a lighter hand than my previous post.
Too much white space.
Feb 8, 2018 23:40:48 #
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Feb 9, 2018 05:30:37 #
Hello BW,
I looked at this pic for a long time and thought what would make it OK as it stands. You cannot move the dam, but if it is at all possible to recreate the shoot to do it with Callie's sightline following the taper and perhaps an arm as well. I think that would harmonise the image and make it flow, ones eye would start with her work upwards and back down again, perhaps darken the top left triangle to assist in that.
I looked at this pic for a long time and thought what would make it OK as it stands. You cannot move the dam, but if it is at all possible to recreate the shoot to do it with Callie's sightline following the taper and perhaps an arm as well. I think that would harmonise the image and make it flow, ones eye would start with her work upwards and back down again, perhaps darken the top left triangle to assist in that.
Feb 9, 2018 14:46:46 #
I will be shooting again with Callie, and I like your suggestion. As a side note, this is a very popular hiking area, and as the weather warms, the crowds will increase. We came across a couple of boys hiking in the area, one was carrying nothing, and the other had a mattress strapped to his back.
ajed wrote:
Hello BW,
I looked at this pic for a long time and thought what would make it OK as it stands. You cannot move the dam, but if it is at all possible to recreate the shoot to do it with Callie's sightline following the taper and perhaps an arm as well. I think that would harmonise the image and make it flow, ones eye would start with her work upwards and back down again, perhaps darken the top left triangle to assist in that.
I looked at this pic for a long time and thought what would make it OK as it stands. You cannot move the dam, but if it is at all possible to recreate the shoot to do it with Callie's sightline following the taper and perhaps an arm as well. I think that would harmonise the image and make it flow, ones eye would start with her work upwards and back down again, perhaps darken the top left triangle to assist in that.
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