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I think I like this one
Jan 20, 2018 02:43:16 #
I had another shoot with this young lady, whom billyspad disliked a lot. I have more to post, but I'm still trying to decide whether I like this shot, or not.
Jan 20, 2018 08:45:43 #
I like the setting and the pose is intriguing, but I would have liked to see a bit more of the model's face. I also think the lighting is a bit too simple. It is probably a natural light outdoor shot, but maybe some fill from a reflector would have helped draw my attention to her eye a bit more.
Jan 20, 2018 12:18:44 #
For myself, I think the focal point was missed. You’ve included the eye, but not in focus. The tattoo & nose ring are. Why? What’s the thought?
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Jan 20, 2018 13:24:50 #
One of the reasons I post SFW images here is that I get actual critiques and suggestions. Also, the audience here is more "focused" on image quality and composition. Thanks for the feedback so far.
Jan 20, 2018 14:44:15 #
Billyspad isn't the boss of this group, and is delusional in that he thinks that we care about what he thinks. There are some flaws in this photo that have been pointed out, so get out the camera and try some more! Damn billyspad and full speed ahead.
Jan 21, 2018 08:06:02 #
Bill P wrote:
Billyspad isn't the boss of this group, and is delusional in that he thinks that we care about what he thinks. There are some flaws in this photo that have been pointed out, so get out the camera and try some more! Damn billyspad and full speed ahead.
Agreed!
Jan 21, 2018 08:56:33 #
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Jan 21, 2018 09:09:43 #
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Jan 21, 2018 10:00:47 #
the eye contact was amazing, my eyes went right to hers. Good work, I love it.
Jan 21, 2018 10:56:48 #
buckwheat wrote:
I had another shoot with this young lady, whom billyspad disliked a lot. I have more to post, but I'm still trying to decide whether I like this shot, or not.
The eye should be tack-sharp as the focal-point for me.
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Jan 21, 2018 12:21:39 #
I know the nose ring is "cool" but, it makes it look like something is dripping from her nose and presents a real distraction.
Jan 21, 2018 12:30:41 #
buckwheat wrote:
I had another shoot with this young lady, whom billyspad disliked a lot. I have more to post, but I'm still trying to decide whether I like this shot, or not.
I like this because it tends to make one stop in step, to avoid being caught looking. The un-sharp eye is about to challenge. Motion is definitely implied. i think that too often we forget that interaction is just as important as technique.
I will say that this falls into the Art category.
Jan 21, 2018 20:37:17 #
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