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Dec 21, 2017 11:21:56   #
Robertven Loc: Fort Worth
 
Crested Butte several years ago. Please Critique.


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Dec 21, 2017 12:18:03   #
SATS Loc: Belgium
 
That is dedication to one art, no post modernist rubbish here. Most people would just take a photo then go indoors and paint that but others are purists.

Technically the rules of composition apply. I think you have white balanced for the snow which has given good tones to the artists face. The top 10% - 15% is a slight shade darker but I don't think there is a way around this. Maybe a tad more brightness or contrast to lighten the building but without playing with it I don't know what this would do to the snow.

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Dec 21, 2017 13:59:21   #
Voss
 
Nice subject matter. Good B&W. He feels static sitting in the center of the photo. Would suggest cropping vertically at the door knob behind his leg, and cropping about 2/3 of the snow out from under him. That removes an eye-catching section behind him and reduces the amount of empty space in the photo without losing the outdoor feel. As SATS suggests, increasing the overall brightness a bit might help.

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Dec 21, 2017 15:05:23   #
SATS Loc: Belgium
 
Robert, I have tweeted it a bit, cropped it along the lines Voss suggested and brightened it a bit. I would never put it up without your permission. Alternatively I can send it to you as a PM. The choice is yours.

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Dec 21, 2017 15:18:30   #
Robertven Loc: Fort Worth
 
SATS & Voss, I've taken your good suggestions and made the revisions. Tell me what you think now please


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Dec 21, 2017 15:21:26   #
SATS Loc: Belgium
 
Robertven wrote:
SATS & Voss, I've taken your good suggestions and made the revisions. Tell me what you think now please

That is a whole level better.

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Dec 21, 2017 15:30:07   #
Robertven Loc: Fort Worth
 
Thanks to SATS & Voss.

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Dec 21, 2017 16:21:23   #
Robertven Loc: Fort Worth
 
SATS, yes please PM it to me. Thanks!

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Dec 21, 2017 18:34:32   #
Voss
 
Robertven wrote:
SATS & Voss, I've taken your good suggestions and made the revisions. Tell me what you think now please


I'd say it's a definite improvement. It simplifies the photo, keeps the context, and keeps the "dedicated artist" feeling.

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Dec 22, 2017 03:31:10   #
waegwan Loc: Mae Won Li
 
Robertven wrote:
Crested Butte several years ago. Please Critique.


Wow that's pretty crazy. I wonder if he is painting a white rabbit in a snowstorm. :D Thanks for sharing.

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Dec 22, 2017 09:04:32   #
SonyBug
 
Robertven wrote:
SATS & Voss, I've taken your good suggestions and made the revisions. Tell me what you think now please


I agree, much better composition on the revisions. Now I like it! I have a internal rule. Only put the subject in the center if I am filling the frame with the subject.

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Dec 22, 2017 09:51:47   #
Robertven Loc: Fort Worth
 
nikonbug wrote:
I agree, much better composition on the revisions. Now I like it! I have a internal rule. Only put the subject in the center if I am filling the frame with the subject.


Good rule. I've put it in my rule book too. Thanks for the advice.

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Dec 22, 2017 13:01:08   #
dragonfist Loc: Stafford, N.Y.
 
Brrr!!!, that looks cold. There is a group of about 6 guys that get together every Saturday morning to paint outside where I live. They were right across the road from my house a couple weeks ago painting landscapes. My how I envy them. The talent they have eluded me. You have an eye with the camera. Just stick to what Voss and Sats have to say. They are very talented. That is a nice shot.

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Dec 22, 2017 15:08:37   #
Robertven Loc: Fort Worth
 
dragonfist wrote:
Brrr!!!, that looks cold. There is a group of about 6 guys that get together every Saturday morning to paint outside where I live. They were right across the road from my house a couple weeks ago painting landscapes. My how I envy them. The talent they have eluded me. You have an eye with the camera. Just stick to what Voss and Sats have to say. They are very talented. That is a nice shot.


Thank you. Yes, I have come to realize how talented they are. I'm thankful that they're so helpful also.

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Dec 22, 2017 21:10:58   #
10MPlayer Loc: California
 
I wonder if the cold affects how his paints flow out. Just a random thought. What an interesting picture of a dedicated artiste.

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