Uuglypher wrote:
O.k. Can I have a "do over" ?
I've been back to look at this several times, and, although I originally dismissed what at first blush I had dismissed as a somewhat clunky approach to use of the diagonal, it has grown on me and I must admit that I was simply too hasty with my opinion!
What I first saw as awkward, I now perceive to be a perfectly valid and effective use of the diagonal!
Musta had a momentary episode of encephalic gaseous discharge.
Dave
Well Dave, I don't think you need a do-over. That branch is a little strong, but I would not want to remove it. As you are well aware, little birds do not exactly come out into the open to be photographed. They stay in the tangles and the brush and hide in the shadows. The one thing that is imperative in shooting a chickadee is getting that catchlight. That is also the thing that makes them so hard to shoot. That black head! Arrrgggg! They are so cute ... but I digress ... back to the branch. I think it would be an improvement if I lightened shadows and added a little gaussian blur so that it does not distract. It was something that bothered me in the beginning. I didn't think of toning it down, but your comment made me give it a little more thought.