imp by mike wrote:
Overall, the pose & lighting are good, but the facial expression looks like she's in pain. When I zoom in, I see that she's watching to see if you're paying attention. The expression needs to be different. The cloth is being lightly held in her right hand, but the left is tied up. I would try one spiral wrap from wrist to hand on the left.
I'd like to know what your post thoughts have been.
Doesn't look like she is in "pain" to me. We have different thoughts on how "pain" looks.