Benttree Loc: GA.

Ok, here we go again with my Yudi.
Creative griticks please on the image.
This one again is travel photo with a single camera light. With mirrorless Sony 55mm 1.8 lens.

Dziadzi Loc: Wilkes-Barre, PA

I would like more light on the left side of her face.

Benttree Loc: GA.

Dziadzi thank you from you critique,
I agree, the light is the problem with shooting with single flash on eve inside a hotel on travel with a single flash.

Reinaldokool Loc: San Rafael, CA

I think it is very well done. If I read the light correctly, your main light was a window to your right. The on-camera flash was a fill light.
I like the high-key lighting and that the model doesn't disappear into the background.

Two of my constant issues are that with high-key it is too easy to "melt" the model into the background. Done perfectly your mind can create the separation, but it is better if there is at least a faint differentiation. You handled this perfectly. My second thought is the splayed fingers on Yudi's right hand are disruptive. Putting her fingers together would add coherence.

Usually having limbs pointing toward the camera is problematic as they look foreshortened. However, you handled that well by shooting from an elevation.

I especially love the depth in her eyes. They are mesmerizing. Sure she is a gorgeous woman overall and her breasts are beautiful, etc. But it is those eyes and lips that take this out of the ordinary and make this an outstanding image.

Benttree Loc: GA.

Reinaldokool, Well said , thank you from the advise. I have a small studio in here at home , but than on the travel in foreign country, inside portrait coming challenge without secondary lights and a reflector etc.
Yes you are correct She is a so beautiful latina lady. Sailing with her in the caribbean waters, life is fantastic.

peekaboo

Why? The lighting is great.

JohnFrim Loc: Somewhere in the Great White North.

I find the pose a bit awkward looking... she looks imbalanced with her right breast too far from her body centre and her head too far over her left shoulder.