another from the Zoe shoot, this one in colour
LK, nice shot! Like the nice tight crop. Hey, that projected pattern is what I was getting at, didn't realize you had something similar. Makes for an interesting composition.
I'm a little distracted by the red in the background. Remember that any amount of red, no matter how small tends to pull our eye away from our subject, weakening the subject just slightly.
I like Zoe, I feel like I know her by now and she's a wonderful model.
Nice job with a creative shot!!! Nice job.
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leans too much towards titillation rather than art for my personal taste but each to his own.
so do you have a full body pic of her yet?
I'm pretty sure this forum is for nudes, or suggestive nearly nude models, therefore any classy shot, whether full nude or not, is appropriate. Art shots are nice, but not every shot has to be 'Art'. Suggestive is the word that comes to mind, but anything that shows womanliness is good. Right?
The shadow under the hand is distracting but I like the pattern made by the design of the panties. Something immediately bothered me ... it seems ... unbalanced ... nice idea but it needs "tweaking". Hmmm Can't put my finger on it.
Billyspad wrote:
leans too much towards titillation rather than art for my personal taste but each to his own.
It seems that what is merely art to many, including the photographer, to you is titilating or pornoghrsphic in nature.
That's why it's better not to bring our personal baggage into a critique since it will almost always be wrong!
It's better to comment purely on the photography itself and not interject it with what affects us personally. It's ok to say how it affects you, because that helps the photographer as well but make it clear that you are speaking only for yourself and not collectively as if others might feel the same way.
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