Pretty girl, old building
Jun 18, 2015 23:39:50 #
Jun 19, 2015 03:55:27 #
:thumbup: great series of shots! I like the location and the model is a very attractive young lady.
Jun 19, 2015 04:32:58 #
The first shot for some reason the young ladies eyes appear to pointing in different directions?
Second shot eyes perfect facial expression really good but the dress off the shoulder thing with a bulge of flesh over the bra does not flatter her at all. The dress on her shoulder may have worked better.
Number three is the best of them but wish you had not cut off her foot.
Second shot eyes perfect facial expression really good but the dress off the shoulder thing with a bulge of flesh over the bra does not flatter her at all. The dress on her shoulder may have worked better.
Number three is the best of them but wish you had not cut off her foot.
Jun 19, 2015 05:51:22 #
Jun 19, 2015 05:54:28 #
Very nice set! Pretty lady, nice setting!!
My only comment is on #3, sure wish you hadn't cut the foot off like that, otherwise it would be a great image.
My only comment is on #3, sure wish you hadn't cut the foot off like that, otherwise it would be a great image.
Jun 19, 2015 08:11:00 #
I think you did a great job, her eyes are intriguing , that draw you in..
I agree with some of the comments, hey they are just comments for the future shots..
I agree with some of the comments, hey they are just comments for the future shots..
Jun 19, 2015 08:35:03 #
Georgia Peddler
Loc: Brunswick, GA
But, that aside, what do you think of the photos???
Did you like nothing about any of the photos?
Come on - just a little "But, that aside, I really liked your - - - - - ?????
Did you like nothing about any of the photos?
Come on - just a little "But, that aside, I really liked your - - - - - ?????
Jun 19, 2015 08:35:14 #
chip94 wrote:
Did a shoot with Crystal in an abandoned building.
I would have to choose either #1 or #3. The second one just doesn't do it for me because I feel the tree branch/leaves is a bit distracting. Yes, the eyes #1 seems to be a little bothersome but not that bad. Since her foot is partially cut off I would just crop up to maybe her knee if possible. I do like the idea of doing the shoot in an abandoned building though.
Dave
Jun 19, 2015 08:43:09 #
Jun 19, 2015 09:05:46 #
Jun 19, 2015 15:30:34 #
Lovely model and fine shots.
I agree with some of the above comments.
One I would like to add is the foreground leaf in No.2 passes across her chin.
I agree with some of the above comments.
One I would like to add is the foreground leaf in No.2 passes across her chin.
Jun 19, 2015 22:53:44 #
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Jun 23, 2015 13:10:26 #
I'm no expert by any means, so take my comments with a grain of salt, please.
First, gorgeous model and you've captured her eyes beautifully in all three shots. She's engaged with you...always a plus!
The first shot has a WB issue, (on my end). Parts of her appear grayish and yet parts of the face are warmer and quite nice.
I love the second image in terms of lighting and tonality. The pose is not the most flattering for her (over the shoulder gaze is lovely, she just needs to be pivoted more to add more angles... also maybe lose or change the positioning of the draping. It adds visual weight to her midsection and no female appreciates that very much *grins* ).
Unlike other commentary; I don't mind the leaves because I appreciate the natural framing.
The third image is nice, too.
However...because the cut off foot is bothering so many, maybe crop up a bit more (just above the bottom edge of her tush is one option)... unless it was important to you to get the head-to-toe look. In which case, re-shoot.
My only other comment about this shot is that she needs a bit of fill on her face to balance the light on her thigh.
Your model is lovely and your images of her are as well.
First, gorgeous model and you've captured her eyes beautifully in all three shots. She's engaged with you...always a plus!
The first shot has a WB issue, (on my end). Parts of her appear grayish and yet parts of the face are warmer and quite nice.
I love the second image in terms of lighting and tonality. The pose is not the most flattering for her (over the shoulder gaze is lovely, she just needs to be pivoted more to add more angles... also maybe lose or change the positioning of the draping. It adds visual weight to her midsection and no female appreciates that very much *grins* ).
Unlike other commentary; I don't mind the leaves because I appreciate the natural framing.
The third image is nice, too.
However...because the cut off foot is bothering so many, maybe crop up a bit more (just above the bottom edge of her tush is one option)... unless it was important to you to get the head-to-toe look. In which case, re-shoot.
My only other comment about this shot is that she needs a bit of fill on her face to balance the light on her thigh.
Your model is lovely and your images of her are as well.
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