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The Archway to Home
Aug 13, 2011 10:07:50   #
usmc1063 Loc: Pittsburgh, PA Area
 
I took this one in a local park I like the way the archway accented the birdhouse in the background



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Aug 14, 2011 15:56:57   #
Strubbles
 
I think it would have been better if you moved to your right at a different angle. I find this image to have too much stuff in it... and the center of interest is hard to find.

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Aug 14, 2011 16:31:56   #
Chere Loc: Arizona
 
Strubbles wrote:
I think it would have been better if you moved to your right at a different angle. I find this image to have too much stuff in it... and the center of interest is hard to find.


I agree with you Stubbles. If the shot is the birdhouse framed by the arch then just show that. I have an old mentor who sits on my shoulder and tells me what I'm looking at and then shoot what I want to convey.

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Aug 14, 2011 20:15:51   #
Rich Loc: Titusville, Fl
 
Very good advice. I would have also stepped to the right and then either moved closer or zoomed in to get the entrace way and the bird feeder only. Forget the outside areas of the picture, nothing there.

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