Love the pose, hate the Background.
Nov 4, 2013 23:29:04 #
She is also too far to the right. I should have paid more attention. Oh, well.
Nov 4, 2013 23:31:24 #
I like that she's off-center. Have you tried a soft focus or "faux bokeh?" Pretty girl with nice light!
Nov 4, 2013 23:34:14 #
tainkc wrote:
She is also too far to the right. I should have paid more attention. Oh, well.
crop it?
Nov 4, 2013 23:41:41 #
nicelights
Loc: 30 miles east of LA
Sorry folks, I don't think that's the REAL issue here.
The lighting on the "subject" and and focus don't match.
This is a composite shot......and (my opinion) not well done.
The lighting on the "subject" and and focus don't match.
This is a composite shot......and (my opinion) not well done.
Nov 4, 2013 23:41:51 #
Don't crop it yet wait. What is it you don't like about the background? can we work on it? I think it fantastic and she is offset that's fine we can see the tree its not to far forget about at . :thumbup: great job
Nov 4, 2013 23:43:59 #
LLucas wrote:
What would I be softening?I like that she's off-center. Have you tried a soft focus or "faux bokeh?" Pretty girl with nice light!
Nov 4, 2013 23:44:42 #
Nov 5, 2013 00:00:54 #
nicelights wrote:
No, it is not a composite shot. I used a bounce flash. But you are right. something does seem amiss. This is very evident when you supersize it and look at her shirt. I have had this problem in low light conditions with improper settings but I was using a 50mm prime F1.8. This should not have had a problem. The original actually looked pretty good. I did not even crop it.Sorry folks, I don't think that's the REAL issue here.
The lighting on the "subject" and and focus don't match.
This is a composite shot......and (my opinion) not well done.
The lighting on the "subject" and and focus don't match.
This is a composite shot......and (my opinion) not well done.
But I think I found the problem. The photo above was saved at 414kb. This new one I saved at 1.2 Mb. The problem seems to have gone away. Tell me what you think.
Nov 5, 2013 00:03:10 #
Pictxterowner wrote:
To me, the background seems too busy. Go ahead and play with it if you want.Don't crop it yet wait. What is it you don't like about the background? can we work on it? I think it fantastic and she is offset that's fine we can see the tree its not to far forget about at . :thumbup: great job
Nov 5, 2013 00:04:47 #
i kinda agree about the background,, it's not horrible, just not quite right. but i do like the way she's off center. it just feels right. good shot.
tainkc wrote:
She is also too far to the right. I should have paid more attention. Oh, well.
Nov 5, 2013 00:09:50 #
Rabbott wrote:
I don't want her centered but I think it would be more natural to the eyes if I had her to the left instead of the right.i kinda agree about the background,, it's not horrible, just not quite right. but i do like the way she's off center. it just feels right. good shot.
Nov 5, 2013 00:13:55 #
i don't know,, i think with the angle of her elbow, and the way her eyes are looking,, maybe this way is better. Just an opinion.
tainkc wrote:
I don't want her centered but I think it would be more natural to the eyes if I had her to the left instead of the right.
Nov 5, 2013 00:26:24 #
Rabbott wrote:
Well, if you like it, that is good enough for me.i don't know,, i think with the angle of her elbow, and the way her eyes are looking,, maybe this way is better. Just an opinion.
Nov 5, 2013 00:30:33 #
what's important, is how YOU feel about it.
tainkc wrote:
Well, if you like it, that is good enough for me.
Nov 5, 2013 00:31:17 #
tainkc wrote:
To me, the background seems too busy. Go ahead and play with it if you want.
8-) I don't think I could find anything wrong . Sky kind of tweaked out on me sorry. :-o
my go at it
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