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Dec 26, 2015 22:36:08   #
firehawk59 Loc: Michigan
 
I am new to photography so any help would be appreciated. I took this with my d3200. 18-55mm lense. still learning the camera. I know the foreground is dark. but thats kind of the way i wanted it to come out. I know it could be better, but hey i'm a newbie


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Dec 26, 2015 22:52:53   #
tomvanb Loc: Anthem, AZ
 
Hi Firehawk, I'm no expert but I would crop both sides and the bottom about half of the black leaving a frame for the sky, Happy New Year, and welcome to UHH, Tom

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Dec 26, 2015 22:55:05   #
firehawk59 Loc: Michigan
 
thats kind of what i thought too when i looked closer at the picture. oh well back to the editing...lol

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Dec 26, 2015 23:12:41   #
firehawk59 Loc: Michigan
 
Quick crop



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Dec 26, 2015 23:12:46   #
firehawk59 Loc: Michigan
 
Quick crop


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Dec 26, 2015 23:20:46   #
wdross Loc: Castle Rock, Colorado
 
firehawk59 wrote:
I am new to photography so any help would be appreciated. I took this with my d3200. 18-55mm lense. still learning the camera. I know the foreground is dark. but thats kind of the way i wanted it to come out. I know it could be better, but hey i'm a newbie


As a newbie, you only learn by shooting and asking questions. Two other suggestions; shoot that kind of of subject as a vertical instead of a horizontal and crop your subject as much as you can in the viewfinder for the image you want. And remember, all photographers, including pros, have made all the same mistakes you are going to make. Just learn from them (both the pros and your mistakes).

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Dec 26, 2015 23:22:13   #
firehawk59 Loc: Michigan
 
thats why i joined here. to get feedback and to get better. you guys are probably gonna see alot of my pictures...... :D

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Dec 26, 2015 23:46:24   #
robertjerl Loc: Corona, California
 
It is also badly out of focus.
Your camera doesn't do well focusing in dim light so use manual focus.

On the other hand if the blur is from camera movement during a long exposure then use a tripod and remote release or shutter delay timer.

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Dec 27, 2015 00:10:51   #
Frequent Flyer Loc: Kujukuri, Japan
 
Newbie here too. May I suggest using a tripod, slowing the speed and use a remote shutter. Manual focus abourt 20 feet away-somebody more experienced can help here, and close down to f22. Play with "shadow" in PP and yes crop the unrecognizable.

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Dec 27, 2015 00:12:33   #
Rongnongno Loc: FL
 
firehawk59 wrote:
thats why i joined here. to get feedback and to get better. you guys are probably gonna see alot of my pictures...... :D

About that....

Click on the 'home' link (top right, just under Ugly)
Then click on 'All sections' (Last selection in the spreadsheet like menu)
Once the list of ALL sections is open you might want to select one of the following two to post your captures:
C&C and 'for your consideration'. I would suggest the later one as it is more honest when it comes to give you a feedback.

By the way, when the forum option list is open you likely will find stuff of interest to you. If so, click on 'subscribe' (right to the forum listing). The next time to click on 'home' these will be listed and not hidden...

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Dec 27, 2015 00:25:07   #
Leon S Loc: Minnesota
 
Photography is actually the art of capturing light. Too much dark without a point of interest isn't going to give you too many wall hangers. Doing pictures in the dark will also require a tripod or use of sand bags. If you don't have a mechanical release, then learn to use the timer on the camera. You used the term quick crop. Wall hangers are seldom done quick. But the best advice I can give you is keep trying and keep watching what others on UHH do and keep asking questions. Leon

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Dec 27, 2015 01:23:11   #
dirtpusher Loc: tulsa oklahoma
 
little help with the camera

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=se51eHz9_fE

composing a big thing

http://www.youtube.com/results?search_query=composing+photogaphy

utube university is a good source of ideas.

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Dec 27, 2015 07:48:56   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
Great suggestions and feedback given!

I like your cropped image better. With better focus or tripod to reduce blur, an appealing study of night sky colors with tree silhouette.

Perhaps consider an area with fewer trees? Often less is more in composition, though I rarely heed my own advice when it comes to landscapes :)

Lots of online articles, videos, books and other resources to help you with your journey, both technically and artistically. Have fun and see you again soon!

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Dec 27, 2015 09:28:52   #
LennyP4868 Loc: NJ
 
under exposed you should shoot with a longer shutter speed when you do that use a tripod

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Dec 27, 2015 11:40:24   #
Wingpilot Loc: Wasilla. Ak
 
I agree with what has already been mentioned here. And I would also add this. There are two points of light on the left side of the photo that detract. Assuming they aren't eliminated with cropping the image, they can be eliminated by using a cloning tool in your post processing program. The cloning tool will cover up distracting things that get into a picture and interfere with what might otherwise be a very nice photo. Pretty useful tool.

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