Took this picture with a telephoto lens with bounce flash and
ambient light. Candid approach as she was not aware of having
her picture taken. I personally like the contemplative positioning.
Would appreciate comments on lighting primarily and secondarily on the pose. Any other suggestions are obviously welcome.
Blonde hair glowing
I really like the composition. The only negative thing is the overhead lighting has created an orange/yellow saturation. I hope you dont mind but I took the pic and edited it with selective color in cs5. just rried to tone down the yellow cast and add a little contrast.
What's with the lipstick? She appears to be so very
young. Some lip color would be fine.
Of course, others will see this topic differently.
The girl is blessed with great hair color.
GordonB. wrote:
What's with the lipstick? She appears to be so very
young. Some lip color would be fine.
Of course, others will see this topic differently.
The girl is blessed with great hair color.
You know this child. 9 years old going on 15. She was in a group of 10-15 girls. I took them all as the were.
MWAC
Loc: Somewhere East Of Crazy
As noted the skin tone is a little off, it's because of the over head lighting is casting a funny colour. Every easily corrected in any number of editing programs.
I'm unsure of the pose, I can't put my finger on why, just something just doesn't "feel" right when I look at it. It just might be that I don't feel a connection with her (no eye contact).
haze99 wrote:
I really like the composition. The only negative thing is the overhead lighting has created an orange/yellow saturation. I hope you dont mind but I took the pic and edited it with selective color in cs5. just rried to tone down the yellow cast and add a little contrast.
I don't mind editing. It teaches the lesson very well. You know the old picture vs. 1000 words effect.
This generates questions. With overhead fluorescent lighting and bounce ceiling flash I am getting this overall too yellow cast. If I try to use flash balance it comes out too blue.
In this case I reverted back to AWB which is of course off. Is there an easy in camera way to compensate (other than custom white balance)?
The next question is how to correct the color balance using either elements or lightroom3 as I do not have cs5?
MWAC
Loc: Somewhere East Of Crazy
Correcting the colour cast is super easy in Lightroom (easier than any other program, in my opinion). In Lightroom go to the Develop section. In the "Basic" panel select the eye dropper tool, move that over to a section of the picture that should be white, black or neutral grey. Select it, the white balance with auto correct. (examples: white shirt, white of the eye, grey sidewalk, black pants, dark shadow, etc).
Now if you have a bunch of pictures that were taken and all have the same w/b issue you can batch process! Simple and easy!
Yes, the lipstick on such a young subject makes it look ...well just posed and not right. Thats not the photographers fault, but the appealing thing about photographing children is their refreshing innocence. Here this child has such lovely hair and a shy pose with a slash of lipstick...looks off kilter, out of place somehow. JMHO~
Does the background behind her head bother anyone
else but me? There are two choices: one, have all the
background the color it is or: have the darker color
that is behind her head which would add contrast to
the background and her hair.
Does the background behind her head bother anyone
else but me? There are two choices: one, have all the
background the color it is from midway to the top or: have the darker color that is behind her head which would add contrast to the background and her hair.
MWAC wrote:
Correcting the colour cast is super easy in Lightroom (easier than any other program, in my opinion). In Lightroom go to the Develop section. In the "Basic" panel select the eye dropper tool, move that over to a section of the picture that should be white, black or neutral grey. Select it, the white balance with auto correct. (examples: white shirt, white of the eye, grey sidewalk, black pants, dark shadow, etc).
Now if you have a bunch of pictures that were taken and all have the same w/b issue you can batch process! Simple and easy!
Correcting the colour cast is super easy in Lightr... (
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I'm quiet sure that won't work in such cases as this. The reason being is that you have two different light sources in this picture. 1) white light from the flash unit, and 2) orange light from the Fluorescent lighting of the room. That gives you two different colors of light hitting the subject. The camera and white balance software adjusts the overall picture leaving only one of the two light sources in correct white balance. the fix is to have both your flash and the florescent casting the same color so that the whole picture can be balanced according to an overall color casting being of the same color.
Yes, it IS the photographer's fault. He could have demanded they wipe some of the color off her lips.
As for her not knowing she was being photographed,
I don't buy that for a second.
MWAC
Loc: Somewhere East Of Crazy
WOW... refrain from making comments about a subjects appearance. It really is uncalled for, especially when the subject/model is a minor.
I think somebody got up on the wrong side of the bed this morning. There's no need to be rude just because you disagree Gordon. That's totally uncalled for.
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